Wednesday, December 19, 2012

Tennessee Williams: Glass Menagerie

Tennessee Williams "was born Thomas Lanier Williams III in Columbus, Mississippi, in 1911. His friends began calling him Tennessee in college, in honor of his Southern accent and his father's home state. Williams's father, C.C. Williams, was a traveling salesman and a heavy drinker. Williams's mother, Edwina, was a Mississippi clergyman's daughter prone to hysterical attacks. Until Williams was seven, he, his parents, his older sister, Rose, and his younger brother, Dakin, lived with Edwina's parents in Mississippi.

In 1918, the Williams family moved to St. Louis, marking the start of the family's deterioration. C.C.'s drinking increased, the family moved sixteen times in ten years, and the young Williams, always shy and fragile, was ostracized and taunted at school. During these years, he and Rose became extremely close. Edwina and Williams's maternal grandparents also offered the emotional support he required throughout his childhood. Williams loathed his father but grew to appreciate him somewhat after deciding in therapy as an adult that his father had given him his tough survival instinct.

After being bedridden for two years as a child due to severe illness, Williams grew into a withdrawn, effeminate adolescent whose chief solace was writing. At sixteen, Williams won a prize in a national competition that asked for essays answering the question “Can a good wife be a good sport?” His answer was published in Smart Set magazine. The following year, he published a horror story in a magazine called Weird Tales, and the year after that he entered the University of Missouri to study journalism. While in college, he wrote his first plays, which were influenced by members of the southern literary renaissance such as Robert Penn Warren, William Faulkner, Allen Tate, and Thomas Wolfe. Before Williams could receive his degree, however, his father forced him to withdraw from school. Outraged because Williams had failed a required ROTC program course, C.C. Williams made his son go to work at the same shoe company where he himself worked.

After three years at the shoe factory, Williams had a minor nervous breakdown. He then returned to college, this time at Washington University in St. Louis. While he was studying there, a St. Louis theater group produced two of his plays, The Fugitive Kind and Candles to the Sun. Further personal problems led Williams to drop out of Washington University and enroll in the University of Iowa. While he was in Iowa, Rose, who had begun suffering from mental illness later in life, underwent a prefrontal lobotomy (an intensive brain surgery). The event greatly upset Williams, and it left his sister institutionalized for the rest of her life. Despite this trauma, Williams finally managed to graduate in 1938.

In the years following his graduation, Williams lived a bohemian life, working menial jobs and wandering from city to city. He continued to work on drama, however, receiving a Rockefeller grant and studying playwriting at the New School in New York. His literary influences were evolving to include the playwright Anton Chekhov and Williams's lifelong hero, the poet Hart Crane. He officially changed his name to Tennessee Williams upon the publication of his short story “The Field of Blue Children” in 1939. During the early years of World War II, Williams worked in Hollywood as a scriptwriter and also prepared material for what would become The Glass Menagerie.

In 1944, The Glass Menagerie opened in New York and won the prestigious New York Drama Critics' Circle Award, catapulting Williams into the upper echelon of American playwrights. A Streetcar Named Desire premiered three years later at the Barrymore Theater in New York City. The play, set in contemporary times, describes the decline and fall of a fading Southern belle named Blanche DuBois. A Streetcar Named Desire cemented Williams's reputation, garnering another Drama Critics' Circle Award and also a Pulitzer Prize. Williams went on to win another Drama Critics' Circle Award and Pulitzer for Cat on a Hot Tin Roof in 1955.

Much of the pathos found in Williams's drama was mined from the playwright's own life. Alcoholism, depression, thwarted desire, loneliness, and insanity were all part of Williams's world. His experience as a known homosexual in an era unfriendly to homosexuality also informed his work. Williams's most memorable characters, many of them female, contain recognizable elements of their author, Edwina, and Rose. His vulgar, irresponsible male characters, such as Stanley Kowalski, were likely modeled on Williams's own father and other males who tormented Williams during his childhood.

Williams's early plays also connected with the new American taste for realism that emerged following the Depression and World War II. The characters in A Streetcar Named Desire are trying to rebuild their lives in postwar America: Stanley and Mitch served in the military, while Blanche had affairs with young soldiers based near her home.

Williams set his plays in the South, but the compelling manner in which he rendered his themes made them universal, winning him an international audience and worldwide acclaim. However, most critics agree that the quality of Williams's work diminished as he grew older. He suffered a long period of depression following the death of his longtime partner, Frank Merlo, in 1963. His popularity during these years also declined due to changed interests in the theater world. During the radical 1960s and 1970s, nostalgia no longer drew crowds, and Williams's explorations of sexual mores came across as tired and old-fashioned.

Williams died in 1983 when he choked on a medicine-bottle cap in an alcohol-related incident at the Elysée Hotel in New York City. He was one month short of his seventy-second birthday. In his long career he wrote twenty-five full-length plays (five made into movies), five screenplays, over seventy one-act plays, hundreds of short stories, two novels, poetry, and a memoir. The mark he left on the tradition of realism in American drama is incredible.

The Glass Menagerie is one of those standard classics that you can use on a Regents exam, as well as learn good playwriting from Williams. What follows is a little help in unlocking the enigma of the play.


After reading a learning a little about Tennessee Williams, work together in small groups or alone and please begin reading The Glass Menagerie aloud. As you read, consider Tom's role in the play as "narrator" and the idea that what we are seeing is a reflection of his memory, not the actual events themselves. This technique is lovingly called a MEMORY PLAY.

Characteristics of Memory Plays:
1. Often use a "narrator" or "first person" character to tell the story.
2. Memory is tenuous and therefore set pieces or props, costumes, setting are representative or use synecdoche.
3. Scenes and characters are atmospheric and subjective. We are getting the narrator's (often the protagonist's) opinion and view of other characters, events. Thus, the style of a memory play is often EXPRESSIONISTIC.
4. Not exactly realism (which strives to present all facts realistically and objectively) the memory play allows for a vivid expression to suggest meaning (metaphor, for example).
And the title: a menagerie is a collection of animals. How is this Southern family of collection of unhappy, brittle (glass), animals? Consider.

HOMEWORK: Complete The Glass Menagerie over break. We will finish watching Amadeus when we return, sorry about that... 

Monday, December 17, 2012

Amadeus: Act One, Day 2

Please hold on to your homework (The Amadeus Notes) until the end of today's class. Turn in this paper at the end of today's class.

Reading, seeing other playwrights' works, and writing your own plays will help you establish writing skills and help establish a personal concept as to what separates a good play from one that does not work as much.

Please read the article: "What Makes a Play" and answer the questions for HOMEWORK:
1. Why is "construction" important for theatrical writing?
2. What is the definition of a "play"?
3. What are some differences between playwriting and other forms of writing?
4. Why is conflict an important literary element to use when writing a play?
5. What are some danger signals of cinematic writing that a PLAYwright should be aware of?
Today we will begin watching the first act of Amadeus.

HOMEWORK: Complete your reading of Amadeus. Please pick up the play The Glass Menagerie from the library. Bring this play with you to next class. Please read the article: "What Makes a Play"and answer the five ?'s to turn in next class.

Friday, December 14, 2012

Amadeus (Research & Act One)

Please take the first 10 minutes of class today to do the following:

1. Find out who Peter Shaffer is. Read about him here.
2. Who was Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart?
3. Style and fashion of the Rococo & Georgian period. What passed as fashion of the day? What might the costumes look like?

When instructed, please go next door. On your way, pick up a part to read out loud in class, if you would like to read today. If you select a part, please make sure you have the energy and enthusiasm to carry through with the part so we don't fall asleep. Readers will get a point of extra-credit.

As we read the play Amadeus by Peter Shaffer, please follow along, take notes, and complete as much of the handout as possible today.

Salieri: Scene 1-2 transition.
Mozart: Adagio, pg. 21
Mozart: Marriage of Figaro, pg. 29
Mozart: The Abduction from the Seraglio: "Martern aller arten" pg. 31
Mozart: The Abduction from the Seraglio (Turkish Finale) pg. 31
Mozart: 29th Symphony in A Major, pg. 49
Mozart: Kyrie from the C minor Mass, pg. 50

HOMEWORK: Complete the reading and analysis of the play's plot and setting as homework. This is due next class.

Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Driving Miss Daisy: Plot

A plot is the sequence of actions or incidents occurring in a story (often in chronological order). In the play Driving Miss Daisy, the author Alfred Uhry relies on plot to show the lives of his main characters Hoke and Daisy.

Today, please examine the play for its plot. Use the handout sheet to track the major events of the play and how the playwright begins, develops, and ends the plot. What central events set off a chain of events (cause and effect) in the play? Follow the MAJOR events in the play and how these events CAUSE an EFFECT that creates a chain of events.

When you have completed your sheet and analysis of the play, please turn in this sheet for participation credit.

If you finish early, I know you are stressed about completing your project for Ms. Gamzon. Please use any time remaining today completing her assignment. Don't waste your time in the lab! No music, no distractions, no wandering around procrastinating! Get your work done!

HOMEWORK: If you have not yet read Driving Miss Daisy, please complete your reading. Also please read "Being a Playwright" (the handout from last class) please do so and complete three of the five exercises at the end of the chapter IN YOUR JOURNAL. See previous post for more details. Otherwise, none.

Sunday, December 9, 2012

Driving Miss Daisy & Intro To Playwriting

Please complete the following today in class:

Journal Writing/Brainstorming/Gathering Ideas: 1st step in the writing process:
  • 1. In your notebook/journal, etc. write the first 10 names you can think of.
  • 2. In your notebook/journal, etc. write the first 10 settings you can think of.
We will now go the library to pick up the play Driving Miss Daisy. When we return from the library, please look up the following information:
1. Who is Alfred Uhry?
2. What year did Uhry write Driving Miss Daisy? What year did he win the Pulitzer Prize for Drama?
3. What was Atlanta, Georgia like in 1940's through the 1970's?
4. What famous historical American figure lived in Atlanta, Georgia in 1948?
The third question concerns SETTING, an essential element of playwriting. Every story and script needs an interesting SETTING.

A setting is: The natural and artificial scenery or environment in which characters in literature live and move. It is the when and where your story takes place.
A setting can be: INTERIOR (happening inside) or EXTERIOR (happening outside)
A setting includes: 
  • Artifacts or Props (the things characters use)
  • Clothes (the things characters wear)
  • Time of day, conditions of the weather
  • Geography and location
  • Trees, animals, and nature
  • Inside and outside sounds, smells, sights
  • All physical and temporal objects. So that means setting refers to:
    • The location (locale) or place the story is set
    • The weather (including the season)
    • The time
    • The time period (historical period)
As you read Driving Miss Daisy, please identify all aspects of the SETTING. See handout.

Please gather in these groups to read the play. Each student should take one of the parts of the play and read it aloud together. One person should read the stage directions and keep track of time.
Group A: Branden, Diamond, Kayli, Ben, Evan
Group B: Frances, Carly, Imani G., Thiery
Group C: Gena, Nicole, Ethan, Nathan
Group D: Imani M, Shayzonique, Isaiah, Grace
Group E: Alexis, Jahni, Kamphasong, Damarys
HOMEWORK: Finish the play on your own. Bring your plays back with you to next class. Please read the chapter handout on "Being a Playwright" from the book The Elements of Playwriting by Louis Catron.

Particularly take note of the writerly advice (most of which should sound familiar): to overcome a blank page, the only way to push through "writer's block" is to write. Set time aside every day to write. For you (and your busy lives) use the time given to you every day in the lab to focus on your writing. You can socialize later. The more you practice, the better a writer you will become!

This marking period we will be doing a lot more reading. Find inspiration from reading plays and seeing plays, when possible. Get involved in theatre in order to understand the form. This is how you grow as a student and a writer.

After completing the handout, please complete three of the five exercises at the end in your journal. (Do not turn these in to me--put them in your journal). You should continue to keep a journal to jot down ideas and exercises we complete in class. Continually add to your brainstorming. As you know, brainstorming or gathering ideas is the first step in the writing process. What you put there you can use for writing projects later.

Wednesday, December 5, 2012

Fiction: Unit Test & Forum Response

After taking the Unit Exam on Fiction, please visit the creative writing forum and post your response to your second short story collection. This post is due by Sunday, December 9 at 11:59 p.m. The forum question is posted on the...forum.

Our next unit will cover stage and film writing. On the index card, write down the last 10 (or as many, up to 10) plays or live performances you have seen, or plays you have read. Turn in your index card by the end of class for participation credit.

HOMEWORK: None.

Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Fiction Portfolio Due!

 Please choose one of the stories from your short story collection and complete either "Story Map #1" or "Story Map #2" for that story. Turn in your analysis by the end of class today.

When you have completed this task, please work on preparing your portfolio:

What goes into a portfolio? Pretty much everything you write.

The purpose of the portfolio is to collect your writing in various stages of completion. A first draft is always a good start, and the more you write, the stronger your writing should be if you are applying the concepts and skills we have been working on in class. As such, I should see anywhere from 3-8 short stories. Some of these will have a second or third draft attached to them, others may still be first drafts. Some stories will be short, others longer. I will be grading your work on a rubric (see above by end of class). Portfolios should include a short reflection about how you're doing in the class. This is where you can explain your progress to me. If there are issues that are harming your progress, please let me know what they are.

Your portfolio is due at the end of class today.

On Thursday, there will be a test on the following:
Plot; plot structure: exposition, inciting incident, rising action, crisis or turning point, climax, denouement or resolution, etc.; conflict; the different types of conflict; linear versus non-linear plots; setting; setting (artificial or manufactured and natural); exterior versus interior settings; locale; functions of setting; regional writers; POV; the different types of point of view; omniscience; multiple-viewpoint; skeptical POV; objective 3rd person POV; choosing a point of view; hamartia; round versus flat characters; characterization; character types; portraying a character; persona; description (particularly using description to characterize a character); character key terms; ways to develop a character; structuring a story and techniques to structure a story (Nov 1 post); ideas for fiction; genres; reader's expectations of any of the following genres: science fiction, romance, literary fiction, historical fiction, mystery/thrillers, fantasy, realistic fiction, etc.; types of readers: fantacists, realists, pragmatists, etc.
To review, please go back starting from Oct. 22 (the beginning of the second marking period) and read the blog posts. Take notes as appropriate and note everything on these posts. Additionally, read the handouts on: genres (brochures), POV, character, characterization, description, setting, plot, etc. 

HOMEWORK: Study for the unit exam.

Friday, November 30, 2012

Plot & Portfolio

Today, please read this blog post and complete the class note questions. Our test next week will cover plot, setting, POV, description, characterization, and character. You should be familiar with all the various terms (see post above this one for a list from which to study for the test). 

PLOT

Plot refers to: the actions or incidents occurring in a story (usually in chronological order, but not always). Stories can be plotted in other ways. See below for details.

Without plot, we do not have a story. A plot is a plan or groundwork of human motivations, with the actions resulting from believable and realistic human responses. In simple terms, plot deals with CAUSE and EFFECT.
E.M. Forester:
“The king died, and then the queen died.”
To have a good plot, a sequence of events must include motivation which is based on reaction to action.
“The king died, and then the queen died of grief.”
Events and time in a story are not important in and of themselves but because one thing happens because of another thing (i.e. cause and effect).

Conflict is the essential element of plot because this is where human responses are brought out to their highest degree.
Once two (or more) forces are in opposition, there is doubt about the outcome, thus producing tension and suspense as well.
There are typically four types of conflict in literature, the last three could also be added in contemporary fiction:
  • Person versus person
  • Person versus self
  • Person versus nature
  • Person versus society
  • (Person versus God is also another common conflict used in literature.) 
  • (Person versus machine) (that which is unnatural)
  • (God or "fate" versus everybody) 
Plot Structure: The arrangement and placement of materials (characters, etc.) or events within a narrative or drama. Plot structure unifies a story so that it all comes together.
  • Plot: Describes the conflicts in a story or narrative.
  • Structure deals with the way a work is laid out and given form to bring out the conflict.
Categories of Plot Structure:
Typical Plot Arrangements
  • Linear (a story that focuses on a specific cause and its effects; this is most typically created when the author uses chronological time to organize the plot events; e.g., one moment or scene or day followed by the next and so on)
  • Non-linear (a story that is not organized by chronological time; a story that uses flashbacks or flashforwards, skipping from one time or event to another) 
How to improve your 1st drafts and their plots:
1. Choose a story you have written in which you are dissatisfied with the plot.
2. Rearrange the plot so that it is not linear. Use a non-linear structure by using a flashback or flash forward technique.
3. Examine one of the weakest points of your plot. Is your story weak because of a crisis, a climax, a conclusion or denouement, or perhaps you did not include an exposition. Rewrite the story by adding any one or more of these details.
4. Examine your story for conflict. Is the conflict appropriate for the story?
5. According to E.M. Forester, to have a good plot, a sequence of events must include motivation which is based on reaction to action. Does your story have this? Rewrite to include character motivation as a reaction to the action of your story.

Lab: Write. Prepare your portfolio. Turn in your questions by the end of class today.

HOMEWORK: Your portfolio is due next class. Please catch up and complete your work. Please bring your short story collections to class on Tuesday. We will be using them in class.

There will be a unit test on Thursday, covering fiction elements. Please come to class on Tuesday with any questions you have on character, characterization, tense, POV, plot, setting, or description.

Wednesday, November 28, 2012

The Fiction Portfolio & Assignments

This marking period we have been working on the craft of fiction. Specifically, we have covered a variety of topics including: character, characterization, POV, setting, description, and will follow all this up with plot.

Today, please write. Your portfolio should include a variety of fiction (both first drafts and some second drafts). I will be grading you on your ability and crafting, as opposed to "is everything there." Your work in your portfolio should reflect the hard work and effort you put into the marking period. If you have little writing (only one or two stories that are not well written), you have not met the requirements of this course for this marking period. The portfolio should show me what you have done in the last six weeks.

Missing Assignments: On your grade report, any score of a "1" indicates that you have not turned in or completed this assignment. You are more than welcome to make up any score of a "1" for more credit, but realize that late and missing work will affect your overall grade. What are you missing? If you cannot tell, then you are either: A). not reading the blog posts each class and noting what assignments are due as HOMEWORK (posted each day at the end of a blog entry) or B). not paying attention (I remind the class verbally each day what homework was due), or C). unable to understand directions. If this is the case, please ask questions about the assignment.

LAB WORK: Please use the time today in the lab to write. If all the homework and story drafts have been completed at this point, please begin working on creating second drafts of your earlier drafts (include what you have been learning in class, and show that you understand this material by including it in your second or third drafts). Keep track of draft numbers, as always.

Finished and there's still time?
Go on to work on one of these setting exercises. This is BRAINSTORMING and should be treated as such. Don't label these exercises yet as a draft ONE. You may complete as many of these exercises as you wish. Change anything you feel you need to as this is just BRAINSTORMING - the first step in the writing process. When you have written one or more of these things, you may use what you've written to start a new draft of a story, or add details to your previous drafts.

HOMEWORK: Select one story from your collection and examine the story for the author's use of SETTING. Write down your observations on an index card and turn in next class. Please also read the handout on Setting and Description.

Monday, November 26, 2012

Setting

You are ready to put your characters in a setting. Before you begin, make sure you understand the following. Take notes on SETTING.
Setting: The natural and artificial scenery or environment in which characters in literature live and move.

Setting is the when and where your story takes place.
Apart from Character and Plot, Setting is one of the most important elements in your writing.

Setting includes:
• Artifacts or Props (the things characters use)
• Clothes (the things characters wear)
• Time of day, conditions of the weather
• Geography and location
• Trees, animals, and nature
• Inside and outside sounds, smells
• All physical and temporal objects
So that means setting refers to:
• The location (locale) or place the story is set
• The weather (including the season)
• The time
• The time period (historical period)
In short: setting refers to all the places and objects that are important in the work, whether natural or manufactured.

Types of Settings:

1. Natural
Nature shapes action and directs and redirects lives.

2. Manufactured
Manufactured things always reflect the people who made them.
Possessions often enter into character motivation and development.

3. Interior: locales INSIDE. Symbolically often refers to private/domestic issues.

4. Exterior: locales OUTSIDE. Symbolically often refers to societal issues.

What is a regional writer?
• A regional writer chooses to set all of his/her stories in one general place or time period. This place usually reflects how the author grew up.

Regional writers include:
• William Faulkner
• Stephen King
• H.P. Lovecraft
• Flannery O’Connor
• Bharakti Mukerjee
• Eudora Welty

Function of Setting:

1. Setting as Antagonist.
  • Settings can cause problems/conflict for characters
2. Setting as reflection of mindset or ideology of one of your characters (often your protagonist)
3. Setting as character portrait
  • Settings reflect or contrast character’s wants/desires, goals
4. Setting as quality of narrative vision
  • Setting establishes trust between storyteller and audience
  • Description of setting helps reader visualize the fictional world
5. Setting as reflection of theme or idea
6. Setting as reflection of conflict
7. Setting as mood or atmosphere
8. Setting as foreshadowing of plot
9. Setting as beginning and ending (establishing and closing shot…or frame)

Now, (THIS IS STILL BRAINSTORMING AND SHOULD BE WRITTEN IN YOUR JOURNAL): choose 1 or more of your characters that you created a character sketch for. This character will be your protagonist. The story should at this point revolve around this character. Put your character in your setting and write a short scene (1-3 pages).

Finished and there's still time?

Go on to work on one of these setting exercises. This is BRAINSTORMING. Don't label it yet as a draft ONE. You may use as many of these exercises as you wish. Change anything you feel you need to as this is just BRAINSTORMING - the first step in the writing process.

Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Character Design & Questionnaire; POV; Writing Exercises

Today we will play around with some exercises to build and create characters. Please complete at least two of the following tasks during the lab. You should keep these brainstorming/idea gathering exercises for future stories you will write. You may keep these assignments and notes in your notebook/writing journal.

1. Complete the character questionnaire. The questionnaire includes information and questions for supporting minor characters and antagonists.
2. On an index card, draw a picture of a character (you may choose to complete this exercise more than once, each time creating a new character.) On the back of the card, write any important details that go along with the character. You may also choose to color your picture if you'd like. Keep these character cards for future stories.
3. Using a magazine cut up photographs or words found in the magazine and arrange these pictures and words to create a character collage. Please pick up scraps around your area if you choose this. Keep the classroom tidy for other students.
4. Choose a character from one of the stories you have read from your short story collection. In your notebook, sketch or design a character that would either be a friend of this character, or a character who would be an enemy or antagonist to this character. Give this new character a description, name, personality, background, etc.

IN THE LAB: Please read the article on POV. On a sheet of paper to turn in, please answer:
  • 1. What are three things you think are important for you to know as a writer about Point of View from this chapter?
  • 2. Explain the difference between 3-Person limited and objective POV.
  • 3. What is meant by "Omniscience"?
  • 4. What are multiple viewpoints?
  • 5. What is skeptical point of view?
When you have completed this article and played around with character design, check out:
HeroMachine. Play around with this website to create a hero/villain/anti-hero character. You can even base one on yourself.

HOMEWORK: Read your short story collection. If you are behind, please use the break to get caught up. Not sure what you had to do in the last six weeks? Check the blog.


Friday, November 16, 2012

POV and Character

Take notes on the following, to turn in today as participation credit:

1. What goes into choosing a POV (point of view) for a story (see below for the answer)?
2. What are the strengths/weaknesses of each POV form (see below for the answer)?
3. Read the chapter on Character. After reading, answer the following questions:
A. According to the article why is character and characterization important?
B. What is meant by hamartia?
C. Why is it important to give your characters a flaw?
D. What is the difference between "round" and "flat" characters?
E. Where do authors find inspiration or ideas for their characters?
F. What are some ways in which an author can portray a character?
When you have read the article and answered these questions, please turn in your answers for participation credit.

Characters, Characterization, & Point of View

Choosing a POV for your character:
Major Question for the author: Who is my story about?
  • --Someone who is most interesting
  • --Someone who is involved in the action of the story
  • --Someone who has the most to gain or lose from the event 
There are three different types of point of view.
1st Person POV: Main character is the narrator (good subjectivity, but lacks objectivity, limited to one character’s mind). 1st person POV narrators can either be RELIABLE (what they say can be trusted) or UNRELIABLE (what they say is often a lie or obfuscates (clouds) the truth). 

2nd Person POV: Main character is the “reader”, used through an objective and omniscient “I” narrator (difficult to maintain for a long time, reader must be willing to play the part, difficult to reach into reader’s mind)

Third Person POV: Omniscient or Limited
Omniscient narrators can tell the story of many characters, but this can be confusing. The reader may not know who the story is about or whose conflict is important.
A limited POV allows the writer to focus on one particular character. The story told is the story of that character. Consistent POV gives a story coherence. Inconsistent POV confuses the reader.
LAB ASSIGNMENT: POV exercise. Please complete the following lab assignment AFTER you have read and answered the questions posted above.
1. Choose one short story from your collection. Choose either the opening line or the ending line of the story. (If you have a favorite line INSIDE the body of the story, you may select that as well.)
2. Using this line as a beginning (you may change any names or details as you deem fit to change, but keep the structure of the sentence) write a story in NO MORE THAN 100 words. Your story should have a beginning, middle, and end--and develop a single character.
3. Write your first story in 1st person POV.
4. Write the same story (still 100 words or less) in 2nd person POV.
5. Write the story a third time (100 words or less) in 3rd person POV (either limited or omniscient, your choice).
HOMEWORK: Choose one of the exercises in the chapter Character and complete it for Tuesday, Nov. 20. Indicate which # you chose when turning in your homework.

Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Short Story Forum Response

During 7th period, please respond and complete the question/critique on the forum regarding your short story collection (A-M). During 8th period we will be returning to the library and checking out our second short story collection.

Lab: Complete draft 2 of any or all of your stories. If you finish early, you may:
1. Read your chosen short story collection, looking specifically for the author's use of characterization (this is homework, as well)
2. Write a new story
3. Write a new poem
4. Revise an old poem from your portfolio, considering persona or speaker and use characterization.

NOTE: Our coffee house performance is scheduled for tomorrow at 7:00 in the Ensemble Theater. Any one who attends AND reads will be given extra participation credit for this marking period. Hope to see you there.

HOMEWORK: Prepare for the coffee house; Read 1-3 stories in your chosen collection and bring your books with you next time to class.

Friday, November 9, 2012

Characterization: Draft #2

After our quiz, please go to the lab and complete the assignment assigned last class. Directions are posted in the post below. Please read the directions VERY CAREFULLY, one sentence at a time. Then complete the assignment.

Please turn in your homework from last class.

HOMEWORK: Complete your short story collection for Wednesday, Nov. 14. Read as many stories as you'd like.

Wednesday, November 7, 2012

Character Exercises (Draft #2)

After our writing exercise, let's discuss characterization and character building in fiction.

Characters are an essential element to poetry, fiction, and plays.

How your characters act, react, handle obstacles and think or feel in a story IS the story. Readers want to connect with a character who thinks, feels, acts, reacts. A character that does not think or feel or act or react to a situation is a boring or static, flat character.

Today, please rewrite your stories (those you have completed a first draft for so far) to include more characterization and character development. There are a myriad of ways to do this. Here are some options:

1. Young writers often forget to have their characters think. Find scenes in your story where you have omitted (left out) this essential character-building element and have your character/protagonist THINK about what is happening, what someone just said, or what he/she just did.

2. Find a scene in your story where your character needs to FEEL something. Either show how the character is feeling by a character's actions, or directly through prose by stating...this character was feeling sad because his dog was run-over this morning by a delivery truck. Either way, FEELINGS help a reader identify and understand a character's motivation.

3. Find a scene in your story where you character is not reacting to the events of the story. Slow down the scene's narrative and get the character involved physically, emotionally (feeling), or intellectually (thinking).

4. Find a scene in your story where your character is not reacting to something another character said or did--find a scene in which an event just happened. Now describe how the character REACTED to this information, event, dialogue, etc.

If we were to break down description in a story into parts, we might divide it into:
A. Details of physical setting or physical character
B. Thoughts and feelings of a character reacting, or acting (often an internal monologue)
C. Details of a subject or idea (often reflective and rich in imagery)
D. Details of an action or event
E. Dialogue
 Examine your story for its use of description. Increase the amount of detail in your 1st draft.

Lab: Complete draft 2 of any or all of your stories. If you finish early, you may:
1. Read your chosen short story collection, looking specifically for the author's use of characterization (this is homework, as well)
2. Write a new story
3. Write a new poem
4. Revise an old poem from your portfolio, considering persona or speaker and use characterization.

HOMEWORK: Please read and select a story in your short story collection and examine the author's use of characterization in the story. How does the author develop character by using dialogue, description, and details? Would you consider the protagonist of the story to be flat, round, stereotypical, dynamic, etc.? Defend your answer with textual details. Please write out your answer and turn it in next class (Friday, Nov. 9)

Tuesday, November 6, 2012

Character & Characterization

Characterization: An author uses characterization to develop character in a story. They do this by using:
  • Dialogue (what a character says)
    • What a character says about him/herself
    • What other characters say about the character
    • Internal thoughts (what a character thinks about another character, him/herself, or an event)
  • Actions (what a character does)
  • Details (description of character's personality, physicality, spiritual or mental state)
Character Key Terms: When referring to characters, we should refer to them correctly.
  • Hero/Heroine: The main character of a story (term often only used in epics or fantasy genres)
  • Villain: The character who opposes the main character (term often only used in epics/fantasy)
  • Antihero: A normal, ordinary character
  • Protagonist: The main character of a story (term preferred for most literature)
  • Antagonist: The opponent of the protagonist (term preferred for most literature)
  • Foil: Either one who is opposite to the main character or nearly the same as the main character. The purpose of the foil character is to emphasize the traits of the main character by contrast, and perhaps by setting up situations in which the protagonist can show his or her character traits. A foil is a secondary character who contrasts with a major character but, in so doing, highlights various facets of the main character's personality.
Characters can be either major or minor, round or flat.
  • Major characters are characters who are important to the conflict and plot of the story. They often have motivations linked with the main conflict
  • Minor characters are characters who are not necessarily important to the story. They often are used to develop the main characters or to provide rising action or complications to the plot.
  • Round characters have a distinct motivation and personality or “voice”; Often they are complex and dynamic (they change through the conflict of the story)
  • Flat characters are characters that do not change significantly through the conflict of the plot. Sometimes the reader knows or cares little about them because of lack of detail or purpose.
  • Stereotypes: Characters who are generally recognized as a “type”; These characters lack individuality and often can be boring because we already know how they will act and why.
Ways to develop character:
  • Characterization: Physical characteristics and personality characteristics which develop the individualization of a character.
  • Motivation: reasons for the character to act in the story
  • Dialogue: What characters say helps to develop them
  • What other characters say about a character also helps develop them
  • Action: Describing the actions of a character helps develop them (allows writer to show not tell)

Thursday, November 1, 2012

Structuring a Story

Today, to begin class, please log on to our forum. Post a comment in the Craft of Writing folder for Short Story Collection #1, and answer the question posed there. Your reply should be completed by the end of today's class.

Many of you have not yet completed the following assignments:
  • 1. The baseline fiction short story.
  • 2. The short story draft for the chapter: Ideas For Fiction
  • 3. The two short story sheets from short stories you have read from your collection.
To those of you who have completed this work, thank you. We are currently writing fiction stories. For each new story you write, you will be gaining skill in writing fiction. All drafts of your stories should be printed out and saved in your portfolio. I have asked for no revisions at this time, but we will be getting there soon.

Writers use a variety of techniques to structure their stories. Take a look at these 8 options, choose one that you haven't used before, and use the technique to write a new story. Genre and length is up to you.
1. Write your story with a beginning, middle, and end. In the beginning, define what your protagonist wants and why he wants it. In the middle, create obstacles the protagonist must overcome in order to accomplish his goal. In the end, resolve the situation in a believable or logical way.

2. Work organically. Make a few notes about your character(s) and scenes. Decide what you want your story to be about and begin writing. Allow one situation to lead to the next. Start by putting your protagonist in a situation and complication, then write until you are stuck or come to a stopping point. Stop to analyze what your character is thinking, doing, or wanting to do. Stay open to a character's choices. Listen to your characters. Put yourself in their shoes, minds, etc. Let them come up with a solution to their main problem or situation.

3. Start a story with your protagonist in a specific scene. Write only this scene. When done consider what the logical sequel to this scene is. Write the sequel as a scene. Then continue to write scenes and sequels until you have a coherent story. Sometimes it's helpful to work from action to action. Try to pull the reader into the next scene by planting a hook, using suspense, or promising more to come.

4. Create an outline of your plot first. Break down the plot scene by scene. What events occur and in what logical order? Write these down as a standard outline. Then place your protagonist in the outline, write the scene as you envisioned it, and keep writing step by step until the entire story is resolved. This form often is useful to writers of the mystery genre. ALTERNATIVE: you can write backwards as well. Start with the ending and write an outline going backwards.

5. Create a visual map or story board of your story. Break down your scenes in images. Include your protagonist and write from your drawings. You may find it useful to use the drawings as "key" moments in your story. Write until you arrive at one of these key moments, then select the next picture or visual and write toward that. Continue until you are done.

6. Write your scenes on 3x5 cards and arrange them on a wall or table or desk. Change the cards around, adding some, tossing out others, until you are satisfied with the arrangement of the plot.

7. Use the standard story structure: create a hook, inciting incident, include exposition, create rising action, rise to a crisis, reach a climax, include falling action, find a resolution or denouement.

8. Mix-n-Match. You may complete any of these techniques to create a story. You may also make up your own path. Creativity has no boundaries. Just write...
IN THE LAB: Use one of these techniques to structure a story (pick one you never or haven't used before), choose a specific genre (take a look at your brochures for options), and write a new draft of a new story. Use any techniques discussed so far in class to come up with an idea (the first step in the writing process).

HOMEWORK: Please read the chapter on Character. In your journal, complete one of the exercises in the chapter. If this creates a draft of a story, please write that and put it in your portfolio.

Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Ideas for Fiction Draft

Ideas For Fiction. Key Points:

Stories come from:
  • 1. Our experiences
    • autobiographical writing can be vivid, direct, and introspective. Your observations provide you with the details you need to start a story and make it real.
  • 2. Our imagination
    • Working from one's imagination allows for the most freedom. Imaginative writing can be vivid, direct, and introspective, but it is also the most creative.
  • 3. Our passions
    • Use your emotions to move your stories. Live through your characters.
Most stories begin with a seed idea. You may need to model your work on writers you admire to get started. You may need to research your topic and idea more fully before you can start. Most writers build a scaffold around their idea and construct a story.

If you have nowhere to begin, start with a theme. Since there are only 4 of these: nature, life, death, love: pick one. Next, apply a message. What do you want to say about: life, love, death, nature? This will usually get you started or unstuck. If you feel like your story is the same as thousands of other stories, change elements to your fiction until you have a variation on the theme. Your writer's voice will make sure your treatment of the theme and message is completely your own.

Use your imagination to move your story forward. If you are stuck, give your character something to do or think about. An intriguing image, a line of dialogue, or a complication or problem will usually force you to continue.

Write the parts of the story that you can during your first draft. You can always fill the story in later with more details, research, and events.

1. Today in the lab please work on writing your "ideas for fiction" draft from your homework assignment last class.

You had your choice of 13 different prompts from pages: 11-22. Choose one prompt and write a story. Length, genre, style and structure is up to you.

2. Complete the short story sheet for a second short story you read in your collection. Hand in when complete.

Things to do if you finish early:
1. Read your short story collection
2. Rewrite your baseline fiction piece. Call your rewrite draft #2.
3. Write another story. Choose another prompt and work on that one as well to compose a draft.
4. Rewrite any poems you have previously written.
Use your time in the lab efficiently.

HOMEWORK: By now you should have read 2-6 stories in your short story collection. Read another 1-3 and be prepared to discuss these stories next class.

Sunday, October 28, 2012

Short Story Collection Analysis; Genre Brochure

To start off today's class, please use the story (or one of the stories) you read in your chosen short story collection to answer the questions posed to you on today's handout.

After completing this step, please continue to work and complete your brochure project today in class. Finish your brochure by the end of class today. Print out your brochure and turn in, but do NOT fold or staple your brochure.

For details about what must be in the brochure, please consult last class' instructions in the post below this one.

If you finish your brochure, you may work on your homework (due Wednesday). 

HOMEWORK: Please read another 1-3 stories from your collection. Bring your books with you next class as well. Please read the handout chapter: "Ideas for Fiction" and complete one of the 13 prompts found in that chapter as a first draft of a new story. Indicate in your heading which prompt you used (the #).

Thursday, October 25, 2012

Short Story Collection & Fiction Genres Brochure

After reading "My Date with the Neandrathal Woman" we will be going to the library.

In the library, please select a collection of short stories for your reading project. We will be spending about 20 minutes down in the library where you will be able to read a little of the collection to test it out. Pick a collection that you will enjoy. Please note that you are NOT required to read the complete collection, but you will be required to read a certain # of short stories from the collection.

When asked, please return to the LAB to complete the following assignment/project:

  • In Microsoft Word or Pages, from the FILE menu, please select New From Template.
  • Choose BROCHURE as a template. Create a brochure about your chosen genre by following the steps below. Be creative. Play around with design and how you present the information in a clear, and creative way. You may use graphics and lists to provide answers to these questions:
1. Describe this genre. What is it?
2. Who is the target reader (a fantasist, a realist, a pragmatist, or what combination?)
3. What are some expectations a reader of this genre might expect?
4. What are some categories of this genre? AND what are the expectations a reader might expect from this genre?
5. Examples of some popular or famous books or films that fit this genre; and/or examples of authors who write in this type of genre.
Today in the lab work on this assignment please.

HOMEWORK: Read 1-3 stories from your collection. You will be using this information and analyzing the stories you read next class. Please bring your selected short story collection with you next class.

Monday, October 22, 2012

Introduction to Fiction

At our level writing is a great way to express yourself. But make no mistake. Writing is a business.
Readers often select books similar to previous enjoyment. If a reader enjoyed a fantasy, the reader is most likely to continue reading fantasy, for example. There are three typical types of readers (note that most people combine these to various degrees, often a combination of two depending on mood or interest):
  • Fantasists: readers who read to escape the tediousness of ordinary life, seeking new frontiers and imaginative fiction
  • Realists: readers who read about contemporary life to learn about or reinforce personal experiences
  • Pragmatists: readers who read for a specific purpose--from cooking to learning history or science
Readers also become loyal to writers so that once you read Stephen King, for example, you might devour as much of his work to make you sick of his style before tearing into another author's work. Publishers count on this to occur.

Lab: Baseline Story

Please choose a type of reader from the above. Write a story for this kind of reader. Your story should be as long as you need it to be. If you finish early with a first draft, go ahead and write another one, and another one. Use the time in the lab to write. Title and label all your work & draft #'s.

Need a break?: Revise and rewrite your poems.

HOMEWORK: If you did not finish your story draft today in class, please complete it at home and print out the first draft for next class. Complete any short story reading we did not cover in class.

Thursday, October 18, 2012

Poetry: Closing Our Unit

Classroom task: In pairs:

Please read the following poems, name its basic THEME, and identify an example of each of the following:
A. Figurative Language
B. Sound Devices
C. Line Devices/Form
D. Syntax/Word Choice
E. Character Devices
The poems:
  • Wallace Stevens: "The Snow Man", pg. 564.
  • Wallace Stevens: "Of Modern Poetry", pg. 572.
  • E.E. Cummings: "Buffalo Bill's", pg. 676
  • Robert Francis: "Cadence", pg. 688
  • Langston Hughes: "Madam and the Rent Man", pg. 696
  • Stevie Smith: "Not Waving But Drowning", pg. 698-699
  • William Stafford: "Traveling Through the Dark", pg. 732
  • Gwendolyn Brooks: "The Mother", pg. 750-751
  • John Ashbery: "The Painter", pg. 791-792
  • Philip Levine: "Starlight", pg. 794-795
Turn in your answers by the end of class today. Turn in whatever you have finished in one period.

After 7th period or when all students are done with their analysis, those students who would like to retake their test may do so now. When you are done with the test, please go next door and work on the lab assignment.

LAB: Please take any poems you have written so far in class and revise them. Make the poems better by using the techniques we have been working with in class. Or: write a new draft of a poem. Title and label all drafts. Save and keep all your work.

Monday, October 15, 2012

Poetry & Analysis

After your test results today, please note the following:
1. Any student who scored less than average (or those who would like to improve their score to the point of mastery (A-level)) will be able to take the exam again Friday.
2. Before moving to our next unit, let's actually try to learn the basics about poetry writing.
 Key poetic terms and devices that a writer should be familiar with:

Prose: We do not concern ourselves with line breaks. Prose is written from the left side of the page all the way to the edge of the right side. Paragraphs are indented. Prose is broken into paragraphs, chapters, or sections.
Poetry or Verse: Concerns itself with line breaks. The cadence group or phrase of a line is deliberately broken to keep rhythm, meter, or to highlight a literary device and its effect. It does not flow all the way across the page, but is broken into stanzas, sections, or uses line breaks to create an effect. Poetry uses careful diction (word choice) to create texture and meaning in a poem. It often uses more literary devices than prose.

Theme: there are only four basic themes in literature: life, death, love, and nature. While these all can be defined further (the theme of revenge, for example, or human conflict), a poet only writes about one of these basic themes. Life usually encompasses almost everything.
Message/Moral: this is what the author tries to communicate about the theme or subject.

Literary devices:
  • Figurative language: imagery (metaphor, simile, personification, allusion, symbol)
  • Sound devices: alliteration, assonance, consonance, onomatopoeia, rhyme
  • Line devices/form: stanzas, meter, enjambment, caesura
  • Syntax & Word Choice: inversion, juxtaposition, diction, tone
  • Character devices: persona, voice. tone, monologue
Classroom models:

"The Road Not Taken" by Robert Frost (pg. 538)
"Acquainted with the Night" by Robert Frost (pg. 548)
"Shall I Compare Thee to a Summer's Day" by William Shakespeare (pg. 165)

Classroom task: In pairs:

Please read the following poems, name its basic THEME, and identify an example of each of the following:
A. Figurative Language
B. Sound Devices
C. Line Devices/Form
D. Syntax/Word Choice
E. Character Devices

The poems:
Wallace Stevens: "The Snow Man", pg. 564.
Wallace Stevens: "Of Modern Poetry", pg. 572.
E.E. Cummings: "Buffalo Bill's", pg. 676
Robert Francis: "Cadence", pg. 688
Langston Hughes: "Madam and the Rent Man", pg. 696
Stevie Smith: "Not Waving But Drowning", pg. 698-699
William Stafford: "Traveling Through the Dark", pg. 732
Gwendolyn Brooks: "The Mother", pg. 750-751
John Ashbery: "The Painter", pg. 791-792
Philip Levine: "Starlight", pg. 794-795

Turn in your answers by the end of class today.

LAB: Please take any poem you have written so far in class and revise it. Make the poem better by using the techniques we have been working with in class. Or: write a new draft of a poem. Title and label all drafts.

HOMEWORK: None. Unless you wish to study for your re-take exam, or have not yet completed your portfolio. Turn in any missing work by next class if you'd like minimal credit this marking period.

Thursday, October 11, 2012

Poetry Test & Portfolio

Today after our poetry test, please use the lab to complete and prepare your portfolio. See post below for details about preparing your portfolio. Remember to include a reflection in your portfolio.

Please turn in your homework (Mary Oliver poetry study sheet).

HOMEWORK: None.

Monday, October 8, 2012

Preparing for the Exam & the Portfolio

On Thursday we will be taking our unit exam in poetry and the writing process. You should be familiar with the following terms and concepts (taken from your class readings, notes, and from the blog posts).

Test review: the complete writing process, techniques to avoid writers block, theme, the four common themes in literature, persona, moral or message, line breaks, stanza forms, sound devices, diction, tone, voice, caesura, enjambment, cadence groups, onomatopoeia, assonance, alliteration, consonance, euphony, cacophony, rhyme, diction, texture, imagery, figurative language, metaphor, simile, personification, allusion, symbol, allegory, meter, iamb (iambic), trochee (trochaic), dactyl (dactylic), anapest (anapestic), spondee (spondaic), couplet, tercet or triplet, quatrain, sestet, octave, tetrameter, pentameter, hexameter, Terza Rima, Shakespearean sonnet form, free verse, prose.

Today, please prepare your portfolio by doing the following:

1. Check that you have all the assignments done. If not, please complete them. A full list of required assignments and drafts can be found below.
2. Your portfolio should have a short 3-5 paragraph reflection. Talk about what is working for you in this class, what is easy in poetry for you, what is difficult for you, what you have learned about poetry, what you are still confused about poetry, and discuss your own work: are you happy or dissatisfied with it and why?
3. Remove any assignments that are not the baseline piece or the poetry assignments (i.e., tests, homework and chapters should be removed)
4. Complete second (or third) drafts of any first drafts you have written, using the skills or techniques you have learned: for example:
Using stanzas (change your stanza form)
Using enjambment (change your line breaks to include enjambment)
Using a caesura (change your line breaks to include caesura)
Using meter (change your meter)
Using free verse (change your structure or form by removing meter or pattern)
Using ordinary subject matter (if your work is too vague or abstract, go back to the drawing board; subjects for contemporary poems generally use ordinary subject matter)
Using alliteration (revise your poem specifically to use alliteration)
Using assonance (revise your poem specifically to use assonance)
Using consonance (revise your poem specifically to use consonance)
Using cadence groups (consider the flow and wording of cadence groups and phrases)
Using onomatopoeia (consider the shape and sound of your poem to match tone)
Using diction (consider the specific words you use in a poem)
Using texture (consider your word choice or diction to reflect tone or mood)
Using persona (consider WHO your poem's speaker is)
Using theme (there are four major themes in literature: love, life, death, nature--life can be divided into a myriad of themes...from apathy to yearning)
Using voice (your voice is unique. Revise your poem and consider your use of voice)
Using imagery (revise to appeal to the senses: most likely visual, but also tactile, auditory and olfactory)
Using metaphor or simile (compare one thing to another; revising for this helps visual imagery)
Using allusion (revise by adding an allusion)
Using personification (revise by adding personification)
Using symbol, allegory, or figurative language (revise to suggest larger meanings outside of the obvious)
Remember to spell check and proofread your work. Poems should be punctuated correctly. Review your grammar rules!

What's been due? Here you go:
  • The baseline piece (fiction or poetry, your choice and style)
  • The baseline poem
  • The revision of the baseline poem (we did three versions involving line and meter)
  • The sound poem
  • The 6-20 line poem
  • The Diction/Tone/Voice poem (homework draft)
  • Five ordinary poem drafts (5 first drafts on ordinary subjects)
  • A Lucille Clifton Style poem draft
All draft assignments should be present in your portfolio. Portfolio work is graded on 1. content, 2. quality 3. creativity and 4. revisions. I want to see you using the poetry techniques we have covered so far in class.

HOMEWORK: Please study for your exam on poetry. Please read the selection of poems by Mary Oliver and answer the questions on your homework/study sheet to turn in Thursday.

Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Lucille Clifton & Poetry

Lucille Clifton is a contemporary African American poet. Her work has influenced generations of new poets and therefore her writing is a good model for our own. She was from upstate New York. In 2010 Lucille Clifton died of cancer. Her awards include a Pulitzer Prize for Poetry (one of the highest poetry awards and honors) and she was a Poet Laureate. 

As many African-American poets she tends to write about her experiences. She attempts to bring her voice to the forgotten or silent history of African-Americans.

With a partner please look up the following allusions used in Clifton's work. Write your answers on a separate sheet of paper to turn in at the end of class with you and/or your partner's name on it. This is participation credit for today's class.
1. Amira Baraka
2. Hector Peterson or Soweto Riots (1976)
3. Nelson Mandela & February 11, 1990 (what's the connection?)
4. Walnut Grove Plantation, South Carolina
5. Sotterly Plantation, Maryland, 1989
6. Drug abuse common in African American contemporary culture
7. Rosa Parks
8. Huey P. Newton
READ the handout QUILTING. If you'd like, you may read this with a partner. It is sometimes better to read a poem out loud to hear how it sounds. Sound devices will be more obvious when read aloud. This also is a good way to practice your oral reading skills. As you read, pay attention to meter (if any), line breaks, enjambment, caesura, alliteration, assonance, consonance, onomatopoeia, diction, tone, metaphor, simile, imagery, allusion, stanza form, and so on.

For LAB WORK (after reading Lucille Clifton's poetry): please compose a 1st draft of a poem in Lucille Clifton's style.
1. Choose either a similar theme, style, length, line, meter (free verse), persona, tone, etc. that Clifton uses.
2. Use appropriate imagery, sound devices, and/or allusions in your poem.

IF YOU FINISH YOUR POEM, please continue this class by reading and answering the handout ?'s for the chapter on IMAGERY. See homework below.

WHAT YOU MUST COMPLETE TODAY:
1. Take notes on imagery and poetry that we cover in class.
2. Alone or with a partner, look up the allusions Clifton uses in the selected poems from her book: "Quilting". Turn in at the end of today's class.
3. Read (alone or with a partner) the selected poems from the book "Quilting" by Lucille Clifton.
4. Compose a 1st draft of a poem in the style of Lucille Clifton.
5. If you have time in class, please read the chapter on IMAGERY and answer the questions for that chapter as notes. Hand in your notes if completed. Otherwise complete reading and notes for homework.
HOMEWORK: If you did not complete your reading of the chapter on IMAGERY in class, please complete the reading and answer the questions on the handout regarding IMAGERY. This is due Tuesday, Oct. 9. There will be a unit test on poetry at the end of next week. Gather your notes and study our poetry terms, the writing process, and everything we have covered so far in the craft of writing. Please compose a poem draft in Lucille Clifton's style. Call this: Lucille Clifton Style poem draft #1.

Diction and Imagery

Imagery comes in a few flavors: figurative language, metaphor, simile, personification, allusion, and then sound techniques (alliteration, assonance, consonance, cacophony, euphony, onomatopoeia, rhyme). These techniques help create sound and sight in a poem (two of our most important senses). Using diction, a poet can also recall senses of smell, touch, and taste, but these are harder to do. Here's an example:  

Root Cellar by Theodore Roethke
Nothing would sleep in that cellar, dank as a ditch,
Bulbs broke out of boxes hunting for chinks in the dark,
Shoots dangled and drooped,
Lolling obscenely from mildewed crates,
Hung down long yellow evil necks, like tropical snakes.
And what a congress of stinks!
Roots ripe as old bait,
Pulpy stems, rank, silo-rich,
Leaf-mold, manure, lime, piled against slippery planks.
Nothing would give up life:
Even the dirt kept breathing a small breath.
The reason poets rely so heavily on metaphor and simile as the common currency of poetry is that it relates to imagery. Metaphor and simile say with pictures and specific objects what abstract nouns cannot. They help clarify, focus, and bring an image to the foreground of a poem. This is necessary to communicate an idea.
"Metaphors set up precise identities between two halves of a comparison" - Ted Kooser
However, we don't want our comparisons to be either A). too obscure and difficult to understand or B). too obvious (bordering on cliche).

Its a fine strand of web the poet scuttles across to anchor two dissimilar points of space. When working with metaphor and figurative language in your own poems consider the relationship between the subject and the object (or setting, event, etc.) The most beautiful metaphors/similes are subtle ones that are both fresh and new, while also being familiar.

Pick words (particularly verbs and adjectives) that correspond to the main metaphor/simile working in your poem. This helps to create tone as well as picture the subject in an effective way. Try to extend your metaphors through at least a stanza, if not the entire poem.

Example:
Martin Walls' poem "Snail" is about a snail. There are a series of "snail-appropriate words found in the poem"
Snail
It is a flattened shell the color of spoiled milk, a bold
Swirl slowly stirred that charts the age of what's
Curled inside with the tension of a watch spring. A creature
That embodies the history of metaphysics: first it exists,
Then it doesn't, then it emerges once again, unrolls
One, then another, eyestalk, like periscopes breaking
The surface of its wet-life. And here's the tongue body
The petal-body, molding its shape to the world's shape.
The snail is compared to: spoiled milk, a horoscope, a watch spring, periscope, flowers, tongue, and the world. By writing about a snail, we consider it in its proper function as a comparison/contrast to other life, particularly ours. If a snail has purpose, then so do we.

Spoiled milk gives us a negative image, but the words bold, stirred, and curled (curdled) all seem appropriate word choices for the comparison. The snail furthermore encompasses the world in an orderly way. It is both a watch spring (human made and intelligently designed) indicating the spiral shape of a snail shell, but also a tongue (natural object) that goes along with wet and unrolls.

All in all there are snail words: eyestalk, swirl (the shell), shell, slow.
It moves slowly, and the pace of the poem is also slow: words like slowly, emerge, unrolls, molds (also connected to the smell in the first line as a double meaning), recall the movement of a snail, leaving a wet slime trail behind it. This disgusting invertebrate is compared to the function of the world--giving this little animal a metaphysical meaning that compares its life with ours.

Note that this is a small poem. It doesn't function as a grandiose political idea or earth-shattering observation. It compares (metaphor/simile) us and our human made world to its natural world linking us with nature, reminding us of our own value and worth. Sometimes that's all that's needed.

Ordinary Things Drafts

In the lab please complete your 5 short poems with ordinary things as their subject. Choose items from the list you created from last class, or from your observations now, or from your journal.

Form and structure (line, sound, tone, diction, etc.) is up to you. Write each poem in the same file. Call these drafts ORDINARY THINGS

We will write for 20 minutes to get these 5 drafts completed before we move to our next activity.

During the second part of our class, we will be going next door to read some poetry (see post above regarding Lucille Clifton)

Your portfolios will be due Oct. 11. More information about this will be forthcoming. There will also be a unit test on poetry around that time as well. More on that later.

Thursday, September 27, 2012

Ordinary Things & Diction, Voice, & Tone

Please turn in your homework.

Take the next 15-20 minutes to read the poems by Ralph Fletcher: Ordinary Things.

Depending on the weather, we will be taking a little field trip today. Please bring your journals and a writing utensil with you. Please listen to instructions.

When we return from our "trip" please use the time in the lab to write 5 short poems with ordinary things as their subject. Form and structure (line, sound, tone, diction, etc.) is up to you. Write each poem in the same file. Call these drafts ORDINARY THINGS

SOME KEY POETIC TERMS YOU NEED TO KNOW:

Diction: word choice. Select words in your poem carefully to carry the most meaning. All words have a denotative meaning and a connotative meaning. Understatement, euphemism, and other rhetorical strategies may be used to affect a poem's diction. Speaking to your elderly grandparents uses a different diction than speaking to your "homies".

Voice: The agent or "speaker" speaking through the poem. Also called the "persona".

Tone: Often the attitude of your speaker or the voice. Identified in a poem by diction.
  • Tone can be formal or informal depending on the diction a poet uses.
  • Tone can be ironic, sarcastic, serious, pedantic, or hyperbolic depending on the voice a poet selects.
  • Tone can be positive or negative or neutral. Selecting one of these tones can or should affect your diction.


Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Quiz: Sound & Line & Using the Lab to Write Poetry

After our quiz, please complete the following writing activities:

1. Use any DRAFT ONE poem (the sound poem or the 6-20 line poem first drafts we have done recently), and rewrite them to include any (or all) of the following (call this DRAFT TWO):
  • Sound imagery: Alliteration, assonance, consonance, onamatopeia
  • Meter: tetrameter, pentameter
  • Metrical feet: iambic, trochaic, dactylic, anapestic
  • Stanza: couplet, tercet or triplet, quatrain, sestet, octave
  • Enjambment or self enclosed lines or caesura
  • Syllabic verse (create a pattern with your first stanza, then stick to that pattern)
  • Visual imagery: metaphor, simile, allusion, figurative language
  • Cut unnecessary or repeated words that do not add to the meaning or overall effect of the poem
  • Add specific words that create texture, tone, and feeling
  • Hook us with your opening line
  • Impress us, surprise us, or get us to think about your closing line
2. Write poetry. Choose a theme, consider a message or meaning, write a poem.

3. Done? Write more poetry. Choose another theme, create another message or meaning, write another poem.

4. Still done and the class has time left? Write another poem. And another. And another. Write until you have a portfolio filled with poem drafts. Use your time in the lab effectively and productively.

HOMEWORK: Please read about Diction, Tone, and Voice. Answer the questions on a separate piece of paper to be turned in as participation credit next class (Sept. 28):
  • What does DICTION mean, according to Mary Oliver?
  • What is TONE, as defined by Mary Oliver?
  • What is VOICE, according to Mary Oliver?
  • According to Mary Oliver, what three (3) components make up DICTION?
  • What is the major style or tone contemporary poets use in their poems?
  • Who created the definition for the concept of Negative Capability? 
  • Try to explain negative capability in your own words.
  • What are some characteristics of a lyric poem?
  • What are some characteristics of a narrative poem?
  • What is a prose poem? How is it both similar and different from prose?
  • What is poetic diction? Give an example.
  • What is a cliche? Give an example.
  • What is inversion? Give an example.
  • According to Mary Oliver, what 2 reasons should a beginning writer heed or understand when asked to write simple, clear, effective poetry, but is given complicated or difficult models from which to learn?
  • Write a new poem. Your poem should be no longer than 6 lines. Make every word count. (You may write out your poem draft by hand in pen or pencil.)

Monday, September 24, 2012

Sound in Poetry (part two)

If you haven't done so already, please read Mary Oliver's explanation of key sound devices: alliteration, assonance, consonance, & onomatopoeia. This can be found in the article we read in class on Wednesday. Make sure you learn and know these techniques by heart!

After reading Mary Oliver's discussion about SOUND, please look at the following links (you may use your headphones). For each, try to notice sound imagery, rhythm and cadence. On the back of your index card (see above), please identify some of the sound devices you noticed working in these poems. Turn in your index card for participation credit at the end of class today.

Poems to listen to:
Writing Activity: Compose a first draft of a new poem where you use specific sound devices. Call this draft one. The assignment is SOUND. Theme, structure, length, and subject is all up to you. This assignment should be titled: Sound Poetry (draft #1).

Having trouble getting started? Try one of these brainstorms in your journal.
  • Choose a letter from the alphabet. List associated words that begin with this letter. Don't try to make sense, but trust your instincts. Rearrange the list into a tongue twister. Write as many tongue twisters in your journal as you need to. Share your tongue twister with a friend.
  • Choose a letter from the alphabet. List associated words that do NOT begin with this letter, but that the letter is present in the body of the word. Ex. little, brittle, shuttle all have "tt" in the word, creating consonance. Write a tongue twister by combining consonance, assonance AND alliteration.
  • Make a list of rhyming words. Write a song or sappy greeting card poem with the words.
  • With a partner try the following to create new words: WRITER ONE starts by whispering or saying the prefix or first part of a word. WRITER TWO finishes the word by naming the root or suffix of the proposed sound. Ex. Writer One: Shh; Writer Two: Uut. The word together: shut. Record a few of these in your notebook/journal.
  • Make two columns in your journal. In one column list common nouns or adjectives: ex. house, rock, green. On the next column, write a different word that means the same thing: ex. hut, stone, beryl. Note how the different word has a different sound and therefore feeling to it.
  • The _____ goes: (insert sound here). We all know a cat goes meow, but what does a pine tree sound like? How about a fence? or a goldfish? Being poetic, play around with the sound of inanimate objects and animals that are not traditionally found on a speak-n-spell. Ex. The rollerskate goes shkurrrr. Make a list of these onomatopoeia.
Once you have brainstormed a bit, select a topic or subject. Write about this subject using poetic sound devices. You may find it easier to write what you want to say first, then replace words on purpose to create alliteration, assonance, consonance, rhyme, onomatopoeia, etc. Good luck!
Some more examples to inspire you:
Other sound poems (these by Dr. Seuss...have fun):
Now you know all about onomatopoeia, assonance, consonance, alliteration, and rhyme (usually referred to as end rhyme). But there is also slant rhyme (near rhyme), internal rhyme, meter, rhythm, repetition, and caesura that creates sound imagery in a poem. Related to this are the literary terms: tone, voice, syntax, depitation, euphemism, understatement, sarcasm, and diction.

HOMEWORK: There will be a quiz on Sound techniques and on the chapter: The Line. You should know your rhythm and meter terms! Study for the quiz please. See previous posts for help.

Prosody & Cadence Groups: Working with Sound

Prosody is the study of sound and word choice in poetry.

Poems originally emerged from songs and music. Lyric poetry, for example, started as a "poem" spoken with the beautiful plucking of a 3-stringed harp called a lyre.
We hear poetry sung or spoken daily when we listen to the radio or to our favorite band.
Poems often have a distinct rhythm or pattern to their rhythm.
The rhythm of poetry includes: beat, meter, scansion

Rhythm (also called beat, metrics, versification, etc.) is the comparative speed and loudness in the flow of words spoken in poetic lines.

Words in poetry are selected, not just for content, but also sound or “musicality” of a line.
Placement in a line is also important.

Large units of words make up sentences and paragraph in prose; smaller units make up phrases or cadence groups. In poetry this is metrical feet.

Words are not read in isolation, but in small groups (cadence groups). Think about how cadence groups work in your own poetry.
Ex. When lilacs last// in the dooryard bloom’d
And the great star// early droop’d
In the western sky// in the night.

Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Sound in Poetry: Part One

From your homework, just a note about the difference between PROSE and POETRY.

PROSE is written or spoken language in its ordinary form, without metrical structure.

POETRY is written or spoken language that is given to the expression of feelings and ideas by the use of distinctive style, word choice, and rhythm or meter.

Poetry, then, is the careful placement of words on a page to illicit a response from its audience. It is unlike normal, everyday writing or speech in that it is ARRANGED. Poetry that does not use meter or a patterned rhythm is what we call FREE VERSE. Most contemporary poetry is written in free verse. Most poems from the 19th century or before are written in metrical verse.

Writing Activity: Write a new poem draft. Your poem should be anywhere between 6-20 lines. Choose a topic or subject and write for 15 minutes. By the end of this exercise, you should have a new poem written. This is a first draft. Don't panic if you are unhappy with your poem. Today, take 15 minutes, and write...

Print out your drafts when you are done with them and turn them into the "in box" by my desk.

Then:

SOUND in POETRY:

Please watch the following video/poems. As you watch please take notes on the index card about what you notice about the SOUND and meter in the poem.
Today, we are going to cover sound and rhythm in poetry. There's a lot here and many terms and literary devices you will need to know. I'd suggest you pay attention and take notes. Expect to be tested on key terms soon. Take notes on key concepts and important vocabulary in this chapter. Read the article before proceeding to the next part of your assignment.

After reading Mary Oliver's discussion about SOUND, please look at the following links (you may use your headphones). For each, try to notice sound imagery, rhythm and cadence. On the back of your index card (see above), please identify some of the sound devices you noticed working in these poems. Turn in your index card for participation credit at the end of class today.

Poems to listen to:
Completely done? What's the next assignment? Try writing a poem using a variety of sound techniques. Theme, structure, length, and subject is all up to you. This assignment should be titled: Sound Poetry (draft #1).

About this course!

This course stresses understanding the characteristics & techniques in the literary genres of fiction, poetry, and dramatic writing. This course will continue to build on students’ reading and writing skills begun in previous creative writing classes. Readings and discussions of works by major writers in the field will be examined as inspiration and models of fine writing. This educational blog is designed for the use of the students at the School of the Arts in Rochester, NY.