Friday, December 19, 2014

Happy Holidays!

Please use the time in lab today to either:
A. Continue/complete your play draft
B. Work on Ms. Gamzon's work
C. Write for your portfolio
D. Watch a film next door

HOMEWORK: None. Enjoy your holiday!

Wednesday, December 17, 2014

More David Ives; Play Project

This afternoon, let's read the short plays: "Variations on the Death of Trotsky" and "Arabian Nights" by David Ives.

Then, it's back to the lab to continue working on our collaborative play projects. Aim to complete the play projects in the next few weeks if you don't finish them today. When you finish, please turn in your script for grading and a participation grade.

OPTION/EXTRA CREDIT: If you want a fun challenge, try writing a short scene (perhaps concerning a little known or unpopular historical figure like Trotsky), then write 3-5 more variations for the same scene. You may also choose a simple situation and do the same (see: "Sure Thing" as a model).

HOMEWORK: None.

Thursday, December 11, 2014

Collaborative Play Project; Playwriting 101, Role of DellaThis

Plays are a collaborative art. It takes many artists working together to create a theatrical production. Consider our own examples of the musical Annie or The Crucible. The building blocks of drama (which means conflict, by the way) are:

A PREMISE: a very short, one-sentence description of your idea: this play is about...
examples: Annie is about a little positive orphan girl who finds a caring family. The Crucible is about the people involved in the Salem Witch Trials. Wait Until Dark is about a blind woman threatened by thieves.

A SITUATION: any action that depends on a decision. Example: a jumper is on a ledge of a roof and is about to jump ("Playwriting 101"), or: A man approaches a woman who is reading in a cafe to strike up a conversation ("Sure Thing"), etc.

A COMPLICATION: a "but...", a "whoops", or an "Uh, oh!" Example: a jumper is on the ledge of a roof and is about to jump BUT a good samaritan interrupts her. Or: A man approaches a woman reading in a cafe for a date but WHOOPS, he says the wrong thing and turns her off.

During 7th period:

  • Please read the plays "Playwriting 101" by Rich Orloff and "The Role of Della" by John Wooten out loud in your groups. Members of the group should play one role.
  • For each play, please identify (as a group) the PREMISE, the SITUATION, and the COMPLICATIONs in the play. 
  • When you have completed that task, you may either:
  • A:
    • Together in your group, decide on a play you will write together. Write possible premises, then vote for the premise you would like to use.
    • Together come up with a list of possible characters and a setting.
    • Together write a situation and possible complications.
    • Then working together in GOOGLE DOCS invite the members of your group to SHARE your document. Each writer will play a "part" by taking on the role of one character in the play (similar to the exercise you did last class, but with more people). 
    • Work together to write a play that has a clear premise, situation, and at least as many complications as there are members in your group. Complications create rising action and the climax of a play.
  • B: 
    • Continue reading the short plays "Bedtime", "Chocolate", "Your Mother's Butt" or "We Cannot Know the Mind of God" as models for your plays. 
    • After reading these plays and recording the premise, situation, and complications (turn in for extra credit), please work on the assignment as directed in option A, above. You may decide to shorten your group to 1, 2, 3, or 4 writers if you'd like.

During 8th period:

Continue writing your plays.

HOMEWORK: None.

Tuesday, December 9, 2014

One Minute Play Exercise; Sure Thing & Playwriting 101

For a good portion of the quarter, we will turn our creative attention to play writing. To start off today, select a name, work with that person on a very short collaborative play script.

The Rules:
 You are going to write 2 short, short plays (no longer than a page in length) today during period 7. Take no more than 20 minutes each to complete both parts of the assignment.
  1. To get you in the mood and to show you a model, please read "One Minute Play" by Christopher Durang with your randomly selected partner. Each of you should read this play silently or out loud together. 
  2. After reading, select a random common setting: ex. a kitchen, a bus stop, a diner, a park, a school yard, a back porch, a golf course, a waiting room, a gas station, a supermarket, a nail salon, an office, etc.
  3. Starting with one writer, create a name and type it on your screen or Google docs. Briefly describe your character (age, occupation, defining trait, etc.), then allow your partner to do the same. Don't discuss the character choice or plan ahead. Just create a random character that might go with your setting.
  4. Skip a line, then start again with the character you created. Write a line of dialogue. Give the keyboard or allow your partner to respond with a line of dialogue for their character. 
  5. Go back and forth in the next 20 minutes, sharing the keyboard or adding dialogue to the file until you have a definite ending. The best way to end a scene is with the words: END OF SCENE.
After completing your short draft, print out three copies of this single sheet. Give one to your partner, keep one, and give the last one to me (in my in-box). 

Next 20 minutes (period 7): 
  1. Select a new partner of your choice. 
  2. Read the play "Phyllis & Zenobia" together outloud or silently as a model.
  3. Do the same exercise. Choose a different setting and different character. 
  4. Print out 3 copies of your scene by the end of period 7. 
After the second bell, please join me in room 238 to read some short plays. Please volunteer to read out loud by selecting a role from those available. 

HOMEWORK: None.

Friday, December 5, 2014

Film Review: Smoke Signals

Using your notes taken while watching the film and using IMDB.com, write a film review. Refer to the handout instructions I gave you to set up your review.

A film review includes:

  • an opening hook to catch the reader's attention
  • a detailed description of the artists involved or responsible for the film, including any info we might need to know like the year the film was made, produced, or who the main actors are. Usually this paragraph also includes a short summary of the film's premise (this is a movie about...).
  • The third paragraph discusses plot and/or characters.
  • You may write a fourth paragraph about sound/special effects, camera work, cinematography or the effectiveness of the writing.
  • The fourth or fifth paragraph discusses the theme or key memorable moments in the film.
  • The fifth or sixth paragraph evaluates the movie and ties up your position on the quality or artistry of the film.
Please turn in your review today by the end of class. If you finish early, please continue to write fiction, poetry, scenes, etc.

HOMEWORK: None. If you did not write your review of the book The Lone Ranger and Tonto Fistfight in Heaven, please complete that and turn it in late.

Monday, December 1, 2014

The Lone Ranger & Tonto Fistfight in Heaven: Discussion & Film

Today, please gather in assigned groups and conduct a discussion seminar on the stories in the collection The Lone Ranger and Tonto Fistfight in Heaven. 

During period 8, please return to room 238 to begin watching and reviewing the film Smoke Signals.

Information on the film can be found here.

As you watch the film today, please jot down some notes to help you write your review next class.

HOMEWORK: If you did not complete the book and write your book review, please do so.






Monday, November 24, 2014

Sherman Alexie: The Lone Ranger & Tonto Fistfight in Heaven

Sherman Alexie references or alludes (allusion) to various key historical, fictional characters and events in his stories. Here are a few definitions/descriptions that may help you:

  • HUD: Housing and urban development (department of the U.S. government). 
  • Drugs: Native Americans have a higher risk for alcoholism and drug use. Many Native American tribes used "drugs" like tobacco and peyote as medicine for spirit walks or to contact the "other" world. European settlers introduced Native Americans to alcohol--Native Americans introduced European settlers to tobacco. 
  • Jimi Hendrix: In the 60's, the hippies were interested in celebrating Native American culture. You can see that in their dress and anti-government protests. They often saw "Indians" as the original people before the government held power over the people. Jimi Hendrix was a guitar player/musician who attended Woodstock. Notice how he's dressed.
  • Desert Storm was the name given to the Gulf War with Iraq in 1990.
  • Crazy Horse: Sioux leader and military figure 
  • Lakota: one of the 500 tribes.
  • Totem animals
  • The Lone Ranger & Tonto & the meaning of the word: Kemosabe
  • Powwow
  • Vision Quest
HOMEWORK: Please complete the short story collection The Lone Ranger and Tonto Fistfight in Heaven. Write a 3-5 paragraph review of the book, particularly explaining what you learned about the art of short story writing from Sherman Alexie. Use specific examples from his stories to support your statements. This critique/review is due Dec. 1.

Sherman Alexie's Writerly Advice; Character Development

Please spend the first 5 minutes of class today completing the character exercise.

Sherman Alexie: "I started writing because I kept fainting in human anatomy class and needed a career change. The only class that fit where the human anatomy class had been was a poetry writing workshop. I always liked poetry. I'd never heard of, or nobody'd ever showed me, a book written by a First Nations person, ever. I got into the class, and my professor gave me an anthology of contemporary Native American poetry called Songs From This Earth on Turtle's Back. I opened it up and--oh my gosh--I saw my life in poems and stories for the very first time."

Sherman Alexie's top 10 Tips for Writers
Various videos/interviews by Sherman Alexie
Sherman Alexie's interview with Stephen Colbert

  • Some ideas/prompts to develop characters. Use any of these prompts to flesh out and develop the characterization of characters from your drafts.
  • Story idea: write from the perspective or voice of a Native American. Put yourself in someone else's moccasins. Develop your character by providing physical details, character traits, and psychological traits. 
  • Story idea: If you had a totem animal, what would it be? How would it find you? What might it say to you? What might it symbolize about your "character"?
  • Story idea: Thanksgiving. Write a story that takes place during this holiday.
  • Story idea: Use Alexie's writing style and model your own fictional story from his structure. 
  • Story/Poem idea: See your "life in stories and poems for the first time" in your life. Write about one of these events.
  • Story idea: Write about your mother or father's life before you were born, but fictionalize events, details. Use the story "Because My Father Always Said...At Woodstock" (pg. 24-36) as a model. You might also write a story in which you recount and analyze the phrase that your father or mother or grandparent(s) always say to you. Start your story with: "My ____ used to always say to me..." or something of that sort.

LAB: Spend some time learning about writing from Sherman Alexie. Use the link above to develop and work with your characters in your fiction.

Continue writing. Please print out your fiction (or as much as you have written in the past few weeks) and put these drafts in your portfolio.

HOMEWORK: Complete the short story collection The Lone Ranger and Tonto Fistfight in Heaven. Write a 3-5 paragraph review of the book, particularly explaining what you learned about the art of short story writing from Sherman Alexie. Use specific examples from his stories to support your statements. This critique/review is due Dec. 1.

Wednesday, November 19, 2014

SOTA's Creative Writing Department!

Welcome to the Creative Writing Department!
Our program includes the best of contemporary and world literature with emphasis on student original composition in the four literary genres:
  • poetry
  • fiction
  • creative non-fiction 
  • script writing 
We prepare students for college and professional success!
Our students have won such literary awards as:
  • Gannon University (Berwyn Moore Poetry Awards)
  • SOKOL (Friend of Rochester Public Library)
  • Geva's Young Playwrights' Contest
  • Scholastic Art & Writing Awards
  • NFAA Young Arts
  • Nancy Thorpe Poetry Contest (Hollins University)
  • Harvard-Radcliffe Essay Contest
  • New England Young Writers Conference 
  • Penfield Poetry Contest
  • National Virgilio Haiku Contest
  • Rochester Teen Film Festival
and many others...

Our students participate in:
  • Master classes with published authors!
  • Reader's Theater productions!
  • Playwrights' Festival productions!
  • Coffeehouse Poetry & Fiction Readings & Poetry Slams!
  • Literary magazine: Lambent!
  • School newspaper: Sotacrat & Chronicle
  • Podcasting, blogging, film production, desktop publishing and so much more!
See our handouts for more details!
Our program meets (and exceeds) the NYS Common Core Standards in English Language Arts.

Sample Original Student Films:

Tuesday, November 18, 2014

A Note About Character; Lab

Let's play around a bit with a few character exercises. These are meant to be done relatively quickly, without a lot of worry or procrastination. As always, prompts and exercises are not the point, but are prewriting--the first step in the writing process. They can also be used to unstick us when we are blocked!

The least you need to know: Character Vocab
  • Character: an imagined person who inhabits a story.
  • Hero/Heroine: The main character of a story
  • Villain: The character who opposes the main character
  • Antihero: A normal, ordinary character (usually a character with human flaws)
  • Protagonist: The main character of a story
  • Antagonist: The opponent of the protagonist (this may be a natural force or setting too)
  • Foil: Either one who is opposite to the main character or nearly the same as the main character. The purpose of the foil character is to emphasize the traits of the main character by contrast, and perhaps by setting up situations in which the protagonist can show his or her character traits. A foil is a secondary character who contrasts with a major character but, in so doing, highlights various facets of the main character's personality.
Characters can be either major or minorround or flat.

Major characters are characters who are important to the conflict and plot of the story. They often have motivations linked with the main conflict

Minor characters are characters who are not necessarily important to the story. They often are used to develop the main characters or to provide rising action or complications to the plot.

Round characters have a distinct motivation and personality or "voice"; Often they are complex and dynamic (they change through the conflict of the story)

Flat characters are characters that do not change significantly through the conflict of the plot. Sometimes the reader knows or cares little about them because of lack of detail or purpose. Often, Flat characters are representative (allegorical or symbolic)

Stereotypes (aka stock characters): Characters who are generally recognized as a "type"; These characters lack individuality and often can be boring because we already know how they will act and why.

How is Character Disclosed in Literature?
Through characterization!
1. What the characters themselves say (and think, if the author expresses these thoughts).
2. What the characters do.
3. What other characters say about them.
4. What the author says about them, speaking as storyteller or observer.
LAB:
Continue writing fiction. See post below for details. As you write, consider how you are developing your character. If this is hazy still in your mind, start creating a backstory for your character as PREWRITING or use one of the exercises we did today in class, then use that information to help you continue writing your story.

HOMEWORK: Please read the introduction and "Every Little Hurricane" from the collection The Lone Ranger & Tonto Fistfight in Heaven. In the short story ("Every Little Hurricane") answer the following:

  1. Who is the story's protagonist? Is this character a hero, villain, antihero, round, flat or stock character? Explain why you answered that using examples from the text.
  2. List the minor characters in the story. How do these characters help define the protagonist? 
  3. Locate and identify one passage (a paragraph or two) in this story that the author uses to characterize his protagonist. Explain how the author uses characterization in this passage.
Our Coffeehouse performance is Thursday. Please select a piece to read and rehearse it, if you are planning on attending!

Tuesday, November 11, 2014

Portfolio Advice

Some questions kept coming up in your self reflections. I will attempt to answer these problem areas and also give you some guidance and tips about strengthening your writing:
  • Question: How can I get motivated to write?
    • Most writers will answer this by stating that they cannot help but write. A professional writer is someone who spends their free and spare time, making time in their day, that is, to write. Even talent cannot make you a professional. Writers are people who write. Period.
      • TIP: Don't spend your time thinking about writing or talking about that great idea. Instead, sit down and type or write in your notebook. Nothing should pull your focus away from this essential rule!
      • TIP: Relax. You don't have to be great at this moment. You are only 14-17 years old. There is no such thing as perfection. Even the best authors think they write some bad work. It happens. We can't always be at the top of our game--that's simply being realistic and human! So give yourself a break!
    • The universe does not owe you anything. We make our own successes by working at them. Yes, writing is work. It can be fun, pleasurable, and even necessary, but it is work. Try to train yourself to realize, just like training for a sport, lifting weights, or exercising regularly, the more you spend your time writing, the more likely it is you will get better at it!
    • Create an artificial deadline for yourself. Set a word count minimum for the day. If you set your creative writing word minimum at 100 words per period or even day, don't go to bed or move on to another project until you have completed these words. If the word count is too easy, increase it gradually until it is a challenge, but not impossible to meet.
    • Decide that you ARE going to use your time to write. Then do it.
    • Remove distractions to the best of your ability. Realize that this is hard to do. In this class, in this school, in this lab--we have to agree that this is our sacred writing time. Do NOT bother one another. You should be writing and your best friends, if you really care about them, should be writing too!
    • Create a contest with yourself or a writer friend. Who can be the first one to write 3 pages of prose? Who can write a sonnet before the other one writes one? 
    • Restrict yourself--make up your own rules and stick by them. One writer (Georges Perec) decided to write a novel that never used the letter "E". He succeeded (but he called it a "win")! The novel I'm referring to is "A Void". Read about it here.
    • Motivational Sites for writers: (from "PR Daily")
      • 1. Writer’s DigestThis site is overflowing with resources for writers. Writer’s Digest also publishes its 101 Best Websites for Writers

        2. Son of Bold Venture. Esquire contributor Chris Jones offers entertaining tips on writing and observations of the profession. Particularly geared toward Journalists. 

        3. Write to DoneTips about writing.

        4. The Grammarphobia BlogGrammar police and casual writers alike will find this blog funny, useful, and entertaining.

        5. Writing White Papers. Writer Michael Stelzner's blog.

        6. Inkwell EditorialA fantastic starting point for anyone looking to get into freelancing. While you’re at it, check out Freelance Writing Jobs, which offers daily updates to help writers get paid for what they do. (Yes. PAID!) 

        7. Six SentencesHere’s the gist: Writers submit stories that consist of six sentences. Pretty simple, right? No, not simple at all. You try telling a good story in six sentences. Seriously, try it and then submit it to Six Sentences blog.

        8. Wordsmith.orgThis site offers daily tips for writers

        9. The Writer Underground. Tom Chandler's blog, which includes some interesting, original interviews with professional writers. 

        10. Daily Writing Tips. This site offers daily, relevant writing tips on word usage, grammar, and punctuation. Many of you need this terribly! No offense meant but your grammar and punctuation skills are really bad. We try to help, but you've got to take the responsibility of your own learning here. Read this daily!
  • Question: How do I get ideas? How do I know what to write?
    • Stephen King addressed this already. I have addressed this. Every professional writer has addressed this. Where do we get ideas?
      • From our lives
      • From our imagination
      • From talking to people (but not in the lab when you should be writing!)
      • From reading!
      • From READING!
      • FROM READING!!!
      • Here: read this article and it will explain what I'm trying to explain.
    • As you know, writing prompts can help budge you a bit, and programs and courses like this one can help "require" you to write so you get practice, but ultimately it is the writer's responsibility to find a reason to write. There is no muse that sprinkles "art" dust on your head to get you to come up with creative ideas. 
In the lab: 
Work on Stephen King's prompt. Use the time in the lab to write. Notice his rules for his prompt. Don't like what he prompts you to do? Change anything you'd like in his scenario, as long as you're writing. 
Don't like that either? write about: 
  • A practical joke that goes wrong
  • A story about human endurance
  • A story about hope
  • A story about revenge
  • A story about sin (or correcting mistakes made in one's life)
You may use Polti's 36 Dramatic Situations (see previous post) to help you. 

HOMEWORK: None. Our coffeehouse is Nov. 20 at 7:00 in the Ensemble Theater. We'd love to see you there!

Thursday, November 6, 2014

Stephen King: On Writing

Stephen King makes some of these points about writing successfully in his book:

  • To be a successful writer you need to do two things as a consistent habit:
    • Read
    • Write
  • Find a space of your own to write. Call this space sacred and keep distractions out (make sure it has a door!)
  • Write about what you want to write about--but tell the TRUTH (as you see it).
  • You will start writing like every other writer in the world by reading and modeling your style on the authors you read.
  • Fiction consists of three important parts:
    • Narration (moves a story from beginning to end)
    • Description (this includes imagery & detail--specific nouns, active verbs, etc.)
    • Dialogue (develops character; should push plot along)
  • Your job as a writer is like an archeologist trying to dig a fossil out of rock. Sometimes the specimen comes out whole and only needs brushing off. Most of the time it will come out in pieces.
  • Base your stories on situations: a speculative idea, for example. Ask yourself "What if...?"; Situations come first. See George Polti's 36 Dramatic Situations!
Class Exercise: In your assigned group (or alone if you are not in a group), please examine Stephen King's short stories and discuss how the author uses narration, description, and dialogue in an effective way. Also: consider how the title adds meaning or points to what is important in the story, and how the author builds suspense by revealing information at certain points to create a larger, more vivid picture for the reader. Consider discussing what surprised you in the stories you read, what passages you thought were effectively written, and examine King's craft. To what conclusion do you come?

Lab Exercise: Use Stephen King's writing exercise as a jumping off point for a story of your own. Read the handout and write the story as he directs you to.

Print out any piece you didn't already print for your portfolio. Portfolios are being collected and are due today!

HOMEWORK: Read Stephen King's collection. Continue to write your story.

Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Stephen King: Writing Advice; Portfolio Due!

This afternoon, please read the short article on writing by Stephen King.

Stephen King on Writing
Stephen King on the Art of Storytelling
Stephen King Speaks About How He Gets Inspired (Lecture)
  • On the index card provided to you, please identify and list the stories you have read or plan to read from Stephen King's collection: Nightmares and Dreamscapes.
  • On the back of the card, please list 3 bits of advice Stephen King gives to young or aspiring authors.
Next class, be prepared to answer the following questions for each of the short stories you have read in the collection:
  • Who is the protagonist of the story?
  • How does King characterize his characters through actions, description, thoughts, and dialogue?
  • What is the setting of the story?
  • What is the tone of the story and how does King create a mood with his diction?
  • How do the events in the story build suspense or conflict?
  • How do the stories you read resolve?
Take notes and be able to cite passages to support your answers! Bring notes with you to class.

Lab: Portfolio:

Your portfolio should have the following in it by the end of class today:
  • Reflection for 1st quarter
  • labeled: best poem
  • labeled: best fiction
  • labeled: best crafted piece (fiction or poetry)
  • Newest revisions should be placed ON TOP of older drafts
  • Keep copies of all your work you wrote this marking period in the portfolio.
    • Remove homework assignments
    • Remove pre-writing or handwritten drafts (if needed)
If you finish early, spend your time reading and completing the homework, or spend your time writing.

Portfolios are due today!

HOMEWORK: Please read AT LEAST 3 stories in the collection Nightmares & Dreamscapes. Take notes on the bulleted points above and be prepared to examine King's craft of writing next class!

Friday, October 31, 2014

Portfolio; Stephen King Project; Elements of Fiction

The deadline for the Nancy Thorp poetry contest and the Bennington Young Writer's Award is today. If you have poetry (Nancy Thorp or Bennington) or fiction or essays (Bennington) consider submitting your work!

Nightmares and Dreamscapes Project:
Please read at least 3 of the stories in this collection by next week (Tuesday, Nov. 3).
As you read, pay attention to the way the story is written and plotted. Be able to answer:
  • Who is the protagonist?
  • How does King characterize his characters through actions, description, thoughts, and dialogue?
  • What is the setting?
  • What is the tone of the story and how does King create a mood with his diction?
  • How do the events in the story build suspense or conflict?
  • How do the stories you read resolve?
In the lab: Continue writing your portfolio. You may spend your time reading and working on the Nightmares/Dreamscapes Project as well.

Literary terms to know concerning fiction:

  • Plot/narrative structure: linear, circular, open-ended, chronological, multiple perspective, frame, flashback/flashforward, epistolary, summary, etc.
  • Plot terms: exposition, rising action, complication, crisis/turning point, climax, falling action, denouement/resolution
  • Point of View: narrator, objective, subjective, reliable/unreliable narrator, stream of consciousness, 1st person, 2nd person, 3rd person limited, 3rd person omniscient, etc.
  • Character: characterization, dynamic, static, stock/stereotypical character, flat versus round character, major/minor characters, antihero, gratuitous act, foil, allegorical character, villain, hero, protagonist, antagonist, etc.
  • Setting: time, locale, regional writer, mood, theme, etc.
  • Tone: diction, setting, suspense, irony: verbal irony, dramatic irony, situational irony, cosmic irony or irony of fate, etc.
  • Style: bildungsroman, naturalistic, symbolic, journalistic, parody, minimalistic, etc.
  • Theme: message, moral, genre, meaning, etc.
  • Imagery: description, verisimilitude, figurative language, symbol, allegory, representation, etc.

In your notes, record the definitions of any of these terms that you don't know. We will cover all of these as we examine fiction in the next few weeks.

HOMEWORK: Read the stories in the collection. 3 are required; you may read more if you'd like. Portfolios are due Tuesday. You should have selected your best poem, best fiction, and best written or crafted piece (either poem or verse). You should have a short reflection about your writing (1-2 pages, double-spaced). 

Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Portfolio Rubric

This is a reprint of the portfolio rubric discussed in September.

Each week (except for workshop weeks) you will be able to submit the writing you are working on (whether it is completed, revised, or incomplete). From these submissions you will be asked to workshop and craft certain pieces throughout the marking period. These pieces may be revised, polished, "crafted", and turned in at the end of the marking period to comprise part of your quarter grade.
5 = Exemplary4 = Accomplished   3.5 = Developing   3 = Beginning
Exemplary: Thoroughly developed and thought provoking characters, plot, structure, conflict, theme, and setting. Title and structure is thoughtful revealing important themes or symbolic ideas. Opening of story hooks and interests reader. Author uses vivid and artistically appropriate description, voice, POV, imagery, and compelling dialogue that reveals characterization or moves plot (if appropriate). Work has no errors in format. Has few errors in spelling punctuation, syntax, and usage. Work includes evidence of several revised drafts. A good example of strong writing or work is evident of a skilled writer. Uses lab and class time to full extent to complete writing projects.

Accomplished: Well developed characters, plot, conflict, theme, and setting. Title and structure is appropriate for the story. Opening of story is appropriate to hook the reader. Author uses good description and dialogue, voice, POV, imagery, etc. Format may have a few minor errors. Has some errors in spelling, punctuation, and usage but nothing that gets in the way of the reader’s ability to discern meaning. Work includes evidence of some revision. A good example of crafted writing at the student's grade level. Usually uses lab and class time but may occasionally be off-task.

Developing: Fairly well developed characters, plot and setting, conflict and theme is present but not compelling as "accomplished or exemplary writers", but piece may have gaps. title and structure is okay, but does not necessarily reveal insight. Uses some description or dialogue, but with uneven success. Format has several errors. Has errors in spelling punctuation and usage that distracts the reader. Work may be accomplished, but story was late. Work includes some evidence of revision (drafts), but revision is largely in grammar and syntax, rather than restructuring. A fair example of on-grade level ability and writing skill. Uses lab and class time sometimes, but often is off topic or surfing the internet for unrelated materials.

Beginning: Development of character, plot and setting, conflict, theme, etc. is on a very basic level, although these elements are present. Story is untitled or structure lacks creativity or insight. Uses limited description and dialogue. Format is incorrect or difficult to follow. Author has careless errors in spelling, punctuation, and usage. Work includes little or no evidence of revision. Story may be developing, but work was turned in late. Story is largely incomplete or undeveloped. An example of a struggling student or work that is not up to 10th grade writing standards. Student does not use lab or class time effectively, often off task or disruptive.

Portfolio; Steven King

This afternoon, during period 7, please work in the lab to prepare your portfolio (due next week).

In your portfolio, you will need to identify:
  • Your best written draft (revised or crafted).
  • Your best poem draft.
  • Your best fiction draft. 
  • A 1-2 page reflection on your writing this marking period. What have you learned? What do you still struggle with? What do you want more assistance/advice on? What are you pleased with in your writing? What questions/weaknesses do you have about your own writing? etc.
Your final portfolio is due next week. Please begin to prepare it. You may, if you wish, obtain feedback of your writing so that you can revise the work you have already written, or spend your time writing new work.

Your best drafts will be graded separately to your weekly portfolio drafts. All grades will be be averaged together for a final grade for the marking period.

The deadline for the Nancy Thorp poetry contest and the Bennington Young Writer's Award are this week. If you have poetry (Nancy Thorp or Bennington) or fiction or essays (Bennington) consider submitting your work!

Our next author to examine is none other than Stephen King--just in time for Halloween! Learn a little about the author here. For participation credit today, please list three things you have learned about Stephen King that you did not know before from this article/video. Turn in your index card with this information by the end of class.

Nightmares and Dreamscapes Project:
Please read at least 3 of the stories in this collection by next week.
As you read, pay attention to the way the story is written and plotted. Be able to answer:
  • Who is the protagonist?
  • How does King characterize his characters through actions, description, thoughts, and dialogue?
  • What is the setting?
  • What is the tone of the story and how does King create a mood with his diction?
  • How do the events in the story build suspense or conflict?
  • How do the stories you read resolve?
In the lab: You may continue writing your portfolio, or you may spend your time reading and working on the Nightmares/Dreamscapes Project.

HOMEWORK: Read the stories in the collection. 3 are required; you may read more if you'd like.

Monday, October 27, 2014

Catching Up; Term Quiz; Portfolio Prep

After our quiz today, please go to the lab to complete the following assignment:

Please choose one poem from the following poets' works and complete the assignment bulleted below:

Edgar Allan Poe
William Blake
Shel Silverstein

1. Choose one poem from each author (click on the link to see a list of poems from this poet).
2. Copy the poem to a word document.
3. Print out your document (one poem for each poet--make sure you have three!)
4. Scan the poem by identifying:
  • Meter
  • Rhythm
  • Imagery
  • Sound
  • Tone
PLEASE NOTE: Use the marks for stressed and unstressed syllables. If the poem is longer than 2 stanzas, you should only scan the first two stanzas. You do not need to scan the whole poem, but you should be able to examine the whole poem for tone, sound, and imagery. When you have completed this assignment, please turn it in. It should be done by the end of class today!

Lab: Write. Prepare your portfolio. Portfolios are due next week: Tuesday, Nov. 4

HOMEWORK: None. Write. Fill up your portfolio!

Thursday, October 23, 2014

Scanning for Meter/Rhythm in Poetry

Please choose one poem from the following poets' works and complete the assignment bulleted below:

Edgar Allan Poe
William Blake
Shel Silverstein

1. Choose one poem from this author.
2. Copy the poem to a word document.
3. Print out your document (one poem for each poet--make sure you have three!)
4. Scan the poem by identifying:
  • Meter
  • Rhythm
  • Imagery
  • Sound
  • Tone
Lab: Write a pattern poem. See previous post for options.

HOMEWORK: None. Study for your poetic term quiz Monday.

Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Grade Report: Weekly Draft Participation

Portfolios will be collected and graded the week of Nov. 3. Students will be asked to submit their single best piece for a major grade, along with their most improved draft for another major grade. Along with students' progress writing during the lab and outside of class, a portfolio then, collects the drafts students are working on during a marking period. Portfolio and writing grades will be averaged with test scores, assessments, and participation credit assignments.

Writing Lab Rubric:
5: Student has shown significant progress with his/her writing, adding many pages of quality writing into their portfolio. Student focused primarily on crafting tips/literary devices discussed in class and can clearly illustrate these terms in their writing. Progress in writing is clearly shown. Student works diligently in the lab with little or no distractions. 
4: Student shows some growth with his/her writing, adding more than 2 pages of quality writing into their portfolio. Student may be beginning to work with literary devices but pieces in the portfolio may have some weaknesses or gaps. Some progress is evident in the portfolio. Student works most of the time in the lab with few distractions. 
3: Student shows little growth with his/her writing, adding 1-2 pages of writing or has not turned in pieces due to them being incomplete. Students may have been absent or missing days in the lab. Little progress in writing is evident in portfolio. Student is often distracted or unable to produce much writing in the lab for a variety of reasons. Student is not writing at home and is retaining little content from the course. 

Line & Meter: Using Pattern and Rhythm in Poetry

In poetry, we don't just break a line wherever we want to, unless we are only writing free verse. Free verse allows us to write in any pattern or structure we would like, but we should know enough to make informed choices about the length of our lines.

Short lines, for example, can make a poem go faster.
Long lines, on the other hand, slow down a poem.

Thus, I can control the speed at which a reader reads my work by adjusting the length of a line.

Sometimes we want to break our poem into stanzas or create a rhythm for our poem (just like in music). Creating patterns based on syllables (beats), a poet can make their poem more musical, allowing it to flow better.

Prose: written language that does not have metrical structure. It is our most common form of writing.

Verse: (literally 'to turn', ex. versus (turn against)) writing that is arranged (crafted) with a metrical rhythm, with careful attention to poetic techniques. A verse "turns" in that it includes a volta, or turn in thought. Usually, poets "turn" or change direction in thought/content/idea, etc. by the end of a poem.

Prosody: Examining the diction and rhythm of poetry: beat, meter, scansion

Rhythm (also called beat, metrics, versification, etc.) is the comparative speed and loudness in the flow of words spoken in poetic lines.

Words in poetry are selected, not just for content, but also sound or “musicality” of a line. Placement in a line is also important. Taken together, poetry is also about structure and form.

Two classifications of poetry: open forms; closed forms.

closed form (traditional poetry), cadence groups form a pattern.
An open form (free verse, mainly), cadence groups do not form a set pattern.

Poetry in open forms tends to stress meaning over versification.

Syllables: individual units of rhythm in a word or line.

Meter: The only tough parts about metrics (meter) is learning to count as you read, and remembering the Latin prefixes for numbers. For your eye, use a virgule or slash (/) to divide the feet in a line. When reading aloud, try counting on your fingers. Extra syllables sometimes crop up, often at ends of lines and sometimes in their interiors, but if the line is basically iabmic, for instance ("da-DUM, da-DUM..." etc.) don't strain too hard with the phonological "lint" that it drags in with it.

Metrical feet:
1-foot = monometer
2-foot = dimeter
3-foot = trimeter
4-foot = tetrameter
5-foot = pentameter (the meter used in sonnets and blank verse lines; very common)
6-foot = hexameter
7-foot = heptameter
8-foot = octameter
9-foot = nonameter
10-foot = decameter

2 Syllable Feet:

Iambic: stress is on the second of two syllable words: ex. reTURN, beCAUSE, atTACK, etc.
Trochee: reverse of the Iambic, stress is on the first of two syllables: MOTHer, SISter, BORing.
Spondee: Both syllables are stressed.

3 Syllable Feet:

Anapest: stress is on the last syllable of a three syllabled word. Ex. Chevro-LET, rockandROLL
Dactyl: stress on first syllable followed by two non stressed. Ex. BU-da-pest, FOR-tu-nate

Caesura: (plural: caesurae) a pause separating cadence groups (however brief) within a line. If the pause is a result of the end of a line pause, then this is end-stopping.

Enjambement (enjambment): If a line has no punctuation at the end and runs over to the next line, it is called run-on or better yet, enjambement (enjambment).

In prosody, you should also examine Style. 

Style of Poems:

Epic: Deals with the history of a heroic character or characters, usually from birth to death
Dramatic: A narrative told using many voices to depict different characters, focusing on conflict
Narrative: A story (short or long), focusing on a person, place, or event
Lyric: A short poem, focusing on an emotion or idea (originally set to the music of a lyre)
Romance: A narrative poem celebrating love, war, and/or religion
Satire: A poem meant to correct immorality and manners through chiding or humor

Along with style, in PROSODY we also examine FORM

Verse (closed form):

• The Stanza
• Tercet (Terza Rima) – 3 line stanza (terza rima, rhyming aba)
• Quatrain – 4 line stanza
• Quintain – 5 line stanza
• Sestet – 6 line stanza
• Chaucerian – 7 line stanza, rhyming ababbcc
• Ottava Rima –8 line stanza, rhyming abababcc
• Spenserian—8 iambic pentameter lines, followed by a hexameter line, rhyming ababbcbcc
• The Villanelle (Lyric, narrative) (5 tercets rhyming aba, followed by 1 quatrain, abaa)
• The Sestina (Lyric, narrative) (6 sestets & a tercet)
• The Pantoum (Lyric, narrative) (unspecified # of quatrains (abab), beginning and ending with same line)
• The Sonnet (Lyric, dramatic) 14 iambic pentameter lines (3 quatrains and a couplet)
• Petrarchan (abba abba cde cde (or cd cd cd))
• Shakespearean (abab cdcd efef gg)
• Spencerian (abab bcbc cdcd ee)
• The Ballad (Narrative) Quatrain stanzas, rhyming abab or abcb
• The Heroic Couplet (Epic, narrative, dramatic) couplet in iambic pentameter or tetrameter
• Epistle (a “letter” in heroic verse)
• Epigram (an aphorism, usually written in couplets)
• Blank Verse (Epic, narrative, dramatic) unrhymed iambic lines
• Limerick (Narrative) 5 line poem, rhyming aabba – often sexual or ‘rude’ subject matter
• Haiku (Lyric) 3 line poem, fewer than 17 syllables; usually about nature
• Triolet (Lyric) Octave with 2 rhymes; first line repeated, second line repeated as eighth
• The Rondel (Lyric) 13 lines in 3 stanzas with 2 rhymes, first 2 lines form refrain at end of 2 & 3 stanza

Open form:

The Elegy (a poem lamenting the death of a person, people, thing, or about the mutability of life)
The Pastoral (a poem concerning rural life or nature)
The Pastourelle (a poem of dialogue between a man and a woman involving a fight) – Dialogue poem
The Ode (a poem in praise of someone or something)
Epithalamion (a poem celebrating the love between two--or more--people, usually for a wedding)
The Riddle (a metaphorical poem, with the subject being unstated)
Monologue (a poem that expresses a character’s inner thoughts and feelings)

Information about Rhythm, Meter, and Scansion can be found here. And another one, just in case you need more explanation: Meter in Poetry and Verse. Read the chapter by Mary Oliver on "The Line", "Some Given Forms", and "Verse that is Free".

LAB:

  • Work on writing drafts of your previous written pieces. Cut, revise, edit, shape, improve your work.
  • Use imagery & sound devices in your work.
  • Revise work for tone, diction, moral, message, theme
  • Develop characterization, setting, tone & mood in your drafts
  • Choose a poem form from those listed above and write a poem using this pattern
  • Repeat any or all of these bullet points as often as possible
HOMEWORK: Read and save your iamb, trochee, spondee, dactyl, anapest example sheets. Read the article "Some Given Forms". Along with the notes on this blog post, take notes on: stanza, spenserian stanza, volta, terza rima, quatrain, tercet, couplet, sonnet, syllabic verse, free verse, enjambment. Come to next class with questions on poetic terms we have covered so far in class this year. 

Friday, October 17, 2014

Prosody; Meter

After our quiz, please go to the lab and complete the "meter & prosody" handout. Turn this in for credit at the end of class today!

With time remaining in the lab, please continue to write. Print out any work you have written this week to your portfolio.

HOMEWORK: None.

Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Sound & Imagery

Sound:

Words are divided into segments (like cadence groups, but of individual sounds)
Ex:
Top (has 3 segments)
Graph (has 4 segments)

Sometimes it takes more than one letter to make a segment. Ph-o-ne (the 'ph' make an "f" sound, for example)

Segments are divided into vowel sounds and consonant sounds (including semivowels).

Vowel sounds: a, e, I, o, u, and sometimes y and w.
All other are consonant sounds.
Consonants come in 3 types:
1. Stop sounds (p, b, t, d, k, g)
2. Continuant sounds (produced by the steady release of the breath and position of the tongue) (n, ng, l, r, th, s, z, sh, zh)
3. Semivowels (f, h, j, l, m, n, r, s, v, w, x, y, z)
There is often a difference between the spelling or graphic of the word and the phonetics (or sound) the word makes.

Euphony & Cacophony

Euphony (good sound) refers to words containing consonants that permit an easy and pleasant flow of spoken sound.
“Thy hair soft-lifted by the winnowing wind” is euphonious.
Cacophony (bad sound) the words do not flow smoothly but rather bump or clash against each other harshly and jarringly.
“Selfish shellfish” “Toy boat” “Red leather”, “the bare black cliff clang’d round him.”

AlliterationAssonance, Consonance, Onomatopoeia and rhyme are all effects of sound. These definitions can be found in your chapter on Sound by Mary Oliver.

Scholarly Advice
1. Examine poems for sound elements.
2. Look for patterns.
3. Isolate the most significant and effective instances of prosody.
4. Think about how prosody is effecting the subject matter or content of the poem.
5. Explain this connection.
Prosody is the study of sound and word choice in poetry.

Poems originally emerged from songs and music. Lyric poetry, for example, started as a "poem" spoken with the beautiful plucking of a 3-stringed harp called a lyre.
  • We hear poetry sung or spoken daily when we listen to the radio or to our favorite band.
  • Poems often have a distinct rhythm or pattern to their rhythm.
  • The rhythm of poetry includes: beat, meter, scansion
Rhythm (also called beat, metrics, versification, etc.) is the comparative speed and loudness in the flow of words spoken in poetic lines.

Words in poetry are selected, not just for content, but also sound or “musicality” of a line.
Placement in a line is also important. Words that start and end a line have more stress.

Large units of words make up sentences and paragraphs in prose; smaller units make up phrases or cadence groups in poetry. In poetry this is what we call metrical feet.

Words are not read in isolation, but in small groups (cadence groups). Think about how cadence groups work in your own poetry.
Ex. When lilacs last// in the dooryard bloom’d
And the great star// early droop’d
In the western sky// in the night.
Let's look at the following links. For each, try to notice sound imagery, rhythm and cadence. On your index card, please identify some of the sound devices you noticed working in these poems. Turn in your index card for participation credit at the end of class today.
LAB: Write up any poem drafts from your "field trips"!

Also: Writing activity: Compose another first draft of a new poem where you use specific sound devices. Call this draft one. The assignment is SOUND.

Having trouble getting started? Try one of these brainstorms in your journal.
  • Choose a letter from the alphabet. List associated words that begin with this letter. Don't try to make sense, but trust your instincts. Rearrange the list into a tongue twister. Write as many tongue twisters in your journal as you need to. Share your tongue twister with a friend.
  • Choose a letter from the alphabet. List associated words that do NOT begin with this letter, but that the letter is present in the body of the word. Ex. little, brittle, shuttle all have "tt" in the word, creating consonance. Write a tongue twister by combining consonance, assonance AND alliteration.
  • Make a list of rhyming words. Write a song or sappy greeting card poem with the words.
  • With a partner try the following to create new words: WRITER ONE starts by whispering or saying the prefix or first part of a word. WRITER TWO finishes the word by naming the root or suffix of the proposed sound. Ex. Writer One: Shh; Writer Two: Uut. The word together: shut. Record a few of these in your notebook/journal.
  • Make two columns in your journal. In one column list common nouns or adjectives: ex. house, rock, green. On the next column, write a different word that means the same thing: ex. hut, stone, beryl. Note how the different word has a different sound and therefore feeling to it.
  • The _____ goes: (insert sound here). We all know a cat goes meow, but what does a pine tree sound like? How about a fence? or a goldfish? Being poetic, play around with the sound of inanimate objects and animals that are not traditionally found on a speak-n-spell. Ex. The rollerskate goes shkurrrr. Make a list of these onomatopoeia. 
Once you have brainstormed and engaged in prewriting a bit, select a topic or subject. Write about this subject using poetic sound devices. Create a draft. You may find it easier to write what you want to say first, then replace words on purpose to create alliteration, assonance, consonance, rhyme, onomatopoeia, etc. Good luck!
    Turn in drafts by the end of the week to your portfolio.

    More sound poems (these by Dr. Seuss...have fun):
    Now you know all about onomatopoeia, assonance, consonance, alliteration, and rhyme (usually referred to as end rhyme). But there is also slant rhyme (near rhyme), internal rhyme, meter, rhythm, repetition, and caesura that creates sound imagery in a poem. Related to this are the literary terms: tone, voice, syntax, depitation, euphemism, understatement, sarcasm, and diction. We will discuss these less obvious techniques in future classes.

    HOMEWORK: Read "The Line" by Mary Oliver. Write. Study your vocabulary words. Prepare for a test on Imagery, Sound, and Line.

    Friday, October 10, 2014

    Ordinary Things

    During period 7, please gather in groups of 3-4. Take turns reading the poems in the collection out loud in your groups. The people NOT reading out loud should identify at least one example (per poem) of imagery after each poem is read. Keep a tally of the group member who identifies the most correct examples of imagery on the index card. Turn in this card to me before you complete period 8.

    During period 8, we all deserve second chances. Today, we are going outside along the poetry walk at the Memorial Art Gallery. As we stroll, jot down and look for ideas or subjects to write poems about. Use Ralph Fletchers poem collection as a model.

    In the sculpture garden we will spend a longer period of time SILENTLY writing! Please do not be offended when I ask you to move away from other students so that you can focus on your writing. You will be given a grade for your participation.

    Use your time outside to inspire yourself to write in your journal.

    HOMEWORK: If you did not complete the chapter on "Sound" by Mary Oliver, please complete it as homework. Take notes on the terms: vowels, consonants, alliteration, assonance, consonance, and onomatopoeia.

    Wednesday, October 8, 2014

    Imagery & Observation

    You were once told that imagery is an image or word that appeals to the senses (sight, touch, taste, smell, sound). There is more to it than that simple concept.

    Imagery is (or can be):

    1. SIMPLE DESCRIPTION. Most of what you read will use description. Description of visible objects or actions is description.
    2. DRAMATIC SITUATION or INTERNAL MONOLOGUE: as soon as a reader becomes aware that the poem is a dramatic or internal monologue, we can visualize the speaker. DIALOGUE has the same effect as monologues.
    3. STORY. Like description, narration causes the reader to form images in his/her head. When the reader realizes that he/she is being told a tale he/she visualizes from his/her own experiences.
    4. METONYMY. When a poet uses metonymy, he names one thing when he really means another thing with which the first is closely connected. e.g. Seven little foreheads stared up at me from the first row. (where "foreheads" is used for "eyes" ).
    5. SYNECDOCHE. When a poet uses synecdoche, he names a part of a thing when he means whole thing (or vice versa) or the genius for the species. The Crown as a substitute for the nation, for example.
    6. Auditory imagery represents a sound.
    • Onomatopoeia: a word that makes a sound.
    • Alliteration, assonance, consonance, rhyme, etc.
    7. Kinesthetic imagery represents movement.
    • as in Wordsworth's poem Daffodils: "tossing their heads in sprightly dance"
    8. Olfactory imagery represents a smell.
    • Gio's socks, still soaked with sweat from Tuesday's P.E. class, filled the classroom with an aroma akin to that of salty, week-old, rotting fish.
    9. Gustatory imagery represents a taste.
    • The sweet marinara sauce makes up for the bland sea-shell pasta that Jeffrey served.
    • Tumbling through the ocean water after being overtaken by the monstrous wave, Mark unintentionally took a gulp of the briny, bitter mass, causing him to cough and gag.
    10. Tactile imagery represents touch.
    • Yalimar dug her feet into the wet sand, burying her toes inside the beach as cold waves lapped at her ankles.
    • The clay oozed between Jeremy's fingers as he let out a squeal of pure glee.
    Imagery can be showcased in many forms. Look particularly for those easy ones: simile and metaphor. Personification, allusion, analogy, and symbol are other easy ones to note.

    Field Trip

    Please follow your teacher's instructions. After our field trip, we will work on writing in the lab. You will need your journal/notebook for the field trip.

    HOMEWORK: Read Ralph Fletcher's Ordinary Things

    Monday, October 6, 2014

    Motivation; Getting Inspired

    Inspiration is often defined as "the action or power of moving the intellect or emotions." As writers and artists, we know when we have inspiration, and we certainly know when we are lacking it! 
     
    While all artists seek inspiration, the job of a writer is not only to gain enough inspiration to write, but to share his or her inspiration with others. This is often done through writing: creating characters that stand in, to some extent, for us or people we know, dialogue, the personas and speakers who portray or communicate ideas, and various other literary elements.
     
    Here is what some writers have said to inspire us to write: 
    • "Any [person] who keeps working is not a failure. He may not be a great writer, but if he applies the old-fashioned virtues of hard, constant labor, he’ll eventually make some kind of career for himself as writer." - Ray Bradbury
    • "A blank piece of paper is God’s way of telling us how hard it to be God." - Sidney Sheldon
    • "Don’t try to figure out what other people want to hear from you; figure out what you have to say. It’s the one and only thing you have to offer." - Barbara Kingsolver
    • "If you have other things in your life—family, friends, good productive day work—these can interact with your writing and the sum will be all the richer." - David Brin
    • "Most of the basic material a writer works with is acquired before the age of fifteen." - Willa Cather
    • "Get it down. Take chances. It may be bad, but it’s the only way you can do anything really good." - William Faulkner
    • "Fiction is about stuff that’s screwed up." - Nancy Kress
    • "Exercise the writing muscle every day, even if it is only a letter, notes, a title list, a character sketch, a journal entry. Writers are like dancers, like athletes. Without that exercise, the muscles seize up." - Jane Yolen
    Inspiration is a gift as precious as gold. Sometimes you strike it rich, other times its absence makes you starve. As you move through this course, decide to find inspiration to try your best. Sometimes this will be easy. Sometimes this will be hard. If you ever feel like giving up, come back to this assignment and fill up your cup with inspiration.
     
    How to Find Inspiration:
    • Take a walk, get some fresh air or get out into nature when you are feeling stressed.
    • Take a hot shower or bath. Find daily ways to relax.
    • Get some sleep. Stress is more likely to occur when we are tired.
    • Read a book. Watch a movie. Listen to a friend read a poem. The more we interact with the written word, the more inspiration we find to try it ourselves.
    • Create a space for yourself where you can write.
    • Enjoy silence. Sitting and breathing deeply in silence can help us relax.
    • Interact with the arts: listen to music, dance, memorize a speech, doodle or paint, play a game.
    • Find inspiration in the last place anyone might look for it.

    Sunday, October 5, 2014

    Workshop, Day 2; Revision


    1. 5 minute cram session for the test on Tone, Diction, POV, theme, writing process, etc.
    2. Quiz on these terms
    3. Read the article "Imagery" by Mary Oliver silently while you are waiting for others to finish the quiz.
    4. Gather in your workshop groups. 
    5. Go to the lab and revise or edit (craft) your work!

    Workshop Groups:
    ONE: Olivia, Jahde, Reyenne, Hetep, Amanda
    TWO: Cameron, Alannah, Jasmina, Janelys
    THREE: Avana, Kami, Rosalia, Frieda, Grace
    FOUR: Aslin, Kierra, Leilanis, Nandi, Kadeja
    FIVE: Justice, Rashid, Robert, Joshua
    What to do in your workshop group:
    • Today, you may share anything you wrote so far this year from your portfolio. When deciding on what piece(s) of writing you want feedback on, consider the pieces that you don't know what to do with next, pieces that are incomplete, or pieces you care about. It is usually a waste of workshop time to workshop a piece that you do not plan to revise. 
    • Get feedback by giving your group members access to your file. I suggest using Google Docs or Google Drive and SHARING your work with the others in your writing group. You may also, if you prefer, print out copies of your work and have your partners write their evaluation on the copy. 
      • If you are using Google or a Word Processor, INSERT COMMENTS to help your peer writers. 
      • Writers should collect the drafts their members wrote on or commented on, and turn these in for participation credit.
      • Try to keep comments helpful and specific!
    • After getting feedback from your workshop group, you should:
      • Revise any previously written piece. Craft your writing!
        • lengthen your stories
        • lengthen your poems
        • Edit/cut your stories or poems
        • Add/cut details
        • Consider setting, diction, tone, denotation & connotation, POV, speaker, persona, characterization, etc. Improve weak spots in your work!
    Period 8: Complete and revise work for your portfolio. Make sure you label your second or third drafts. Keep ALL drafts in your portfolio!

    HOMEWORK: Please read and take notes on the chapter on "Imagery". Pay close attention to these terms: imagery, figurative language, particular & specific language use (diction), simile, metaphor, personification, allusion, symbol. 

    Thursday, October 2, 2014

    Setting Up a Workshop

    Please read the article on "Revising" by Mary Oliver. Then please listen to instructions for your first writing workshop.

    Workshop Groups:
    ONE: Olivia, Jahde, Reyenne, Hetep, Amanda
    TWO: Cameron, Alannah, Jasmina, Janelys
    THREE: Avana, Kami, Rosalia, Frieda, Grace
    FOUR: Aslin, Kierra, Leilanis, Nandi, Kadeja
    FIVE: Justice, Rashid, Robert, Joshua

    What to do in your workshop group:
    • Today, you may share anything you wrote so far this year from your portfolio. When deciding on what piece(s) of writing you want feedback on, consider the pieces that you don't know what to do with next, pieces that are incomplete, or pieces you care about. It is usually a waste of workshop time to workshop a piece that you do not plan to revise. 
    • Get feedback by giving your group members access to your file. I suggest using Google Docs or Google Drive and SHARING your work with the others in your writing group. You may also, if you prefer, print out copies of your work and have your partners write their evaluation on the copy. 
      • If you are using Google or a Word Processor, INSERT COMMENTS to help your peer writers. 
      • Writers should collect the drafts their members wrote on or commented on, and turn these in for participation credit.
      • Turn in the self evaluation/peer evaluation sheet for credit.
      • Try to keep comments helpful and specific!
    • After getting feedback from your workshop group, you should:
      • Revise any previously written piece. Craft your writing!
    • Share discussion questions or analysis of our reading: evaluate the collection Sudden Fiction with each other. 
    Time Remaining: Continue to write or complete work for your portfolio.

    HOMEWORK: None.

    Tuesday, September 30, 2014

    Vocab Quiz; Examining Tone, Diction, POV, Voice in Fiction

    EQ: Have you learned the literary vocabulary we have covered so far in class? What are the components of "songs"? How does an author use tone, diction, POV, and voice effectively in a story? Prepare for our workshop on Thursday.

    After our quiz, please read "Gerald's Song" (pg. 186-189) silently as other students finish. Be prepared to discuss how diction, POV, and tone work effectively in the story. Consider the title and the characteristics of songs:

    • A composition for voice performed by singing
    • A song may use only one voice (solo), or more than one performer (a chorus, for example)
    • Songs are usually short and emotive pieces
    • Songs often use repetition or a refrain
    After reading the story, think about how the structure and voice of the piece function. Consider diction, POV, and tone as mentioned above. Compare your observations with the person to your left.

    LAB: 
    • We will hold a workshop on Thursday. Please write and prepare your writing for a workshop by completing anything you need to or have been working on. 
      • Download Google Crome!
      • Sign up for a Google account if you do not already have one!
      • Use Google Drive to store your files so that others can access your drafts!
    • Write a "song" in prose (or a traditional song in verse). Use "Gerald's Song" or one of your favorite songs as a model.
    • Complete the stories in Sudden Fiction.
    HOMEWORK: Please complete the story collection: Sudden Fiction. As you read the next few stories, consider how the authors use diction, tone, voice, and POV effectively. Be prepared to review the collection as a whole.

    Friday, September 26, 2014

    Diction, Tone, Voice in Poetry; Portfolio - week 3

    After our poetry exercise, please note the following:
    • Diction: word choice. (see notes below)
    • Tone: the overall effect of the diction in a piece of writing, including the choice of subject, imagery, and design or structure (humorous, pedantic, suspenseful, mysterious, melancholy, pleasant, happy, etc.)
    • Voice: the agent speaking in the poem or story
    • Persona: the voice or speaker of a poem
    • Connotation: the attached or assumed meaning of a word, apart from its dictionary or literal meaning 
    • Denotation: the literal meaning of a word 
    • Negative Capability: a poet should be open with or empathetic to his/her subject.
    • Lyric poem: a short, emotive poem (60 lines or fewer)
    • Narrative poem: a poem that tells a story (may have fictional/narrative qualities, such as dialogue, chapter headings, etc.)
    • Long poem: lengthy poems that have a central idea, digressions, and multiple perspective (longer than 60 lines)
    • Prose poem: often blocky or written as a paragraph or two, this is a short, short story that has poetic language and careful word choice (diction) to create an effect
    • Poetic diction: tired, stale language often found in bad poetry (ex. rhyming unnecessarily, using elision, cliché, or inversion, etc.) 
    • The cliche: Overused or common idioms used instead of creative writing
    • Inversion: Reversing word order in a line of poetry (ex. Yoda speak: "A poem you are reading; Inversion it is.")
    • Formal or informational language: overly technical language unsuitable to poetry; usually has a cold, dispassionate, or distant tone
    • Syntax: word order in a sentence. May also refer to grammar and punctuation use. In English word order is usually NOUN + VERB + DIRECT OBJECT.

    In the lab:
    • Type up your poem draft.
    • Continue your "Class Notes" story or "Things I Did" draft (see post below for details!)
    • Continue writing work you have not yet completed.
    At the end of class today, please print ALL new pages you wrote since last week. Check your portfolios if you are not sure what you have already printed out!

    Portfolios are due at the end of class today!

    HOMEWORK: Read the next few stories in Sudden Fiction: pg. 164-185. Read the handout from Mary Oliver on "Diction, Tone, and Voice"

    Wednesday, September 24, 2014

    Wait Until Dark

    We are attending a field trip to Geva to see Wait Until Dark. If you have been left behind, please use the time to catch up on your creative writing classes. See previous posts for the writing assignment.

    HOMEWORK: None.

    Monday, September 22, 2014

    Class Notes; POV & Voice

    When we write stories there are some questions that an author should answer before sitting down to write. Apart from using various techniques to brainstorm or come up with an idea to write about, we must decide:
    • Which POV am I going to use?
    • Which genre am I going to use to write my story?
    • Who is my protagonist? What does my protagonist want?
    Let's look at POV today.

    Choosing a POV for your character: It helps to know basic ideas for your character before choosing a POV:
    We want to answer this Major Question: Who is the story about?
    --Someone who is most interesting
    --Someone who is involved in the action of the story
    --Someone who has the most to gain or lose from the event
    1st Person POV: Main character is the narrator (good subjectivity, but lacks objectivity, limited to one character’s mind). This is the best choice when you have a single protagonist who is involved in telling the story from his/her own POV.

    2nd Person POV: Main character is the “reader”, used through an objective and omniscient “I” narrator (difficult to maintain for a long time, reader must be willing to play the part, difficult to reach into reader’s mind). This is the best choice for experimentation.

    3rd Person POV: Omniscient or Limited
    Omniscient narrators can tell the story of many characters, but this can be confusing. The reader may not know who the story is about or whose conflict is important.
    limited POV allows the writer to focus on one particular character. The story told is the story of that character. Consistent POV gives a story coherence. Inconsistent POV confuses the reader.

    Reliable narrators versus unreliable narrators: if a narrator is telling the truth or has good reason to tell the truth, we can trust the narrator at face-value. If the narrator is lying to us, or is a shady-kind of person, then we can't always believe what he/she says is true. As you write, consider whether or not the voice you are writing in can be trusted!

    Vocabulary: PLEASE STUDY THESE TERMS!

    Diction: word choice. Select words in your poem carefully to carry the most meaning. All words have a denotative meaning and a connotative meaning. Understatementeuphemism, and other rhetorical strategies may be used to affect a poem's diction. Speaking to your elderly grandparents uses a different diction than speaking to your "homies".

    Voice: The agent or "speaker" speaking through the poem or story. Also called the "persona" or "narrator".

    Tone: Often the attitude of your speaker or the voice. Identified in a poem or fiction by diction.
    • Tone can be formal or informal depending on the diction a poet uses.
    • Tone can be ironicsarcasticseriouspedantic, or hyperbolic depending on the voice a poet selects.
    • Tone can be positive or negative or neutral. Selecting one of these tones can or should affect your diction.
    LAB: After reading "Class Notes" & "Things I Did to Make it Possible", please select one of the following prompts to work on in the lab for your weekly writing submission.
    A. Write "class notes" for the people in one of your classes (this one or another one). Where will each of your classmates be in the next thirty years? PLEASE change the name of your peers so that you make this FICTION and not just mean-spirited.
    Alternatively, you may create a "family newsletter" like those given out during the holidays for a fictional family or even for your own family.  
    B. Like "Things I Did..." make a list of ways in which your narrator accomplished something important to his or her life. You may change the tone and write something so insignificant to make a parody of this exercise as well.  
    C. Alternatively, you may write a poem or a short scene instead of a fiction piece, if you'd prefer.
    HOMEWORK: Please read the stories in the collection between pg. 133-163. Please prepare for our field trip to Geva to see Wait Until Dark by reading the materials I have provided for you. Please dress appropriately, bring a bagged lunch, and come to the Commons on Wednesday right after 2nd period. 

    Wednesday, September 17, 2014

    Fiction Discussion; Lab & Week Two Submissions

    Please gather in groups and discuss the short stories in the book: (pg. 88-105).
    Complete the ? sheet and turn in for participation credit.

    Your homework was to read the stories and identify the setting, summarize the plot in one-two sentences, and identify the major/important character(s) in each story.

    After your discussion, please return to the lab to continue to write your "questionnaire" or "hit man" stories (see post below for details!)

    HOMEWORK: Please read the stories between pg. 106-121. As you read, consider how the authors write interesting or effective short stories.

    Tuesday, September 16, 2014

    A Note About Grading, the Lab, & Portfolios

    I will be using a simple rubric for the writing pieces you complete in the lab. Please take a moment to familiarize yourself with the rubric so that you can submit work of the best quality.

    Each week (except for workshop weeks) you will be able to submit the writing you are working on (whether it is completed, revised, or incomplete). From these submissions you will be asked to workshop and craft certain pieces throughout the marking period. These pieces may be revised, polished, "crafted", and turned in at the end of the marking period to comprise part of your quarter grade.
    5 = Exemplary4 = Accomplished3.5 = Developing3 = Beginning
    Exemplary: Thoroughly developed and thought provoking characters, plot, structure, conflict, theme, and setting. Title and structure is thoughtful revealing important themes or symbolic ideas. Opening of story hooks and interests reader. Author uses vivid and artistically appropriate description, voice, POV, imagery, and compelling dialogue that reveals characterization or moves plot (if appropriate). Work has no errors in format. Has few errors in spelling punctuation, syntax, and usage. Work includes evidence of several revised drafts. A good example of strong writing or work is evident of a skilled writer. Uses lab and class time to full extent to complete writing projects.

    Accomplished: Well developed characters, plot, conflict, theme, and setting. Title and structure is appropriate for the story. Opening of story is appropriate to hook the reader. Author uses good description and dialogue, voice, POV, imagery, etc. Format may have a few minor errors. Has some errors in spelling, punctuation, and usage but nothing that gets in the way of the reader’s ability to discern meaning. Work includes evidence of some revision. A good example of crafted writing at the student's grade level. Usually uses lab and class time but may occasionally be off-task.

    Developing: Fairly well developed characters, plot and setting, conflict and theme is present but not compelling as "accomplished or exemplary writers", but piece may have gaps. title and structure is okay, but does not necessarily reveal insight. Uses some description or dialogue, but with uneven success. Format has several errors. Has errors in spelling punctuation and usage that distracts the reader. Work may be accomplished, but story was late. Work includes some evidence of revision (drafts), but revision is largely in grammar and syntax, rather than restructuring. A fair example of on-grade level ability and writing skill. Uses lab and class time sometimes, but often is off topic or surfing the internet for unrelated materials.

    Beginning: Development of character, plot and setting, conflict, theme, etc. is on a very basic level, although these elements are present. Story is untitled or structure lacks creativity or insight. Uses limited description and dialogue. Format is incorrect or difficult to follow. Author has careless errors in spelling, punctuation, and usage. Work includes little or no evidence of revision. Story may be developing, but work was turned in late. Story is largely incomplete or undeveloped. An example of a struggling student or work that is not up to 10th grade writing standards. Student does not use lab or class time effectively, often off task or disruptive.

    About this course!

    This course stresses understanding the characteristics & techniques in the literary genres of fiction, poetry, and dramatic writing. This course will continue to build on students’ reading and writing skills begun in previous creative writing classes. Readings and discussions of works by major writers in the field will be examined as inspiration and models of fine writing. This educational blog is designed for the use of the students at the School of the Arts in Rochester, NY.